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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Well come as I was < !signature-->in courage by a fiend to be gone this journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you into a piece full come for table ground but if you no thing like me you be tried of the same mold contempt or airy voids that sneaks to glory fly woke gather then tall ants which draft tick ally skewers art and graces such in dived level souls with the drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart con trash to ease kind of odor ease very same will not rest pond to a poets rule of dumb which pears to be just act ally what they lethal ridge ally cordon wit newt protest or sin sure as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough will fat make it add mire able odor I weight for the voids to rule ball looming nocturne ally true in neat..? [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
'Lucky' - This is certainly presented with a beauty matching it's words. How very truly lovely. Plucked a heartstring here, you did. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
This is so sad! It starts out reminding me of my lonely mother, but in your case, it ends up your lonely father. I love this poem. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I love this - it's poignant and haunting, and sheds a new light on the feelings of the aging. Very deep and sensitive. ...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Oh..! Marge thank you sooo mush. No one really responds to me any more... My prayers go out to you and all of yours for such sweet acknwledgements. kaleidoscope... This is so sad! It starts out reminding you of a lonely mother, but in this case, it ends up as our lonely father and your lonely mother. I love you bubba, and it's good we know God has everything under control. RJ. yes it's poignant, but not really meant to be haunting per se, yet I wanted it to send a different message of feelings of the aging, and yes it was meant to be deep and sensitive and of course... I was "lucky" to have found a love in writing you. Lucky yours: |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very moving Lucky... Sensitive and very sad...written with true insight.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this... well done! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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