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SEA
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0 posted 02-02-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


I see so much
in your eyes
I see past
the little lies

Lies from your heart
I thought them true
I can't believe
I trusted you

What a fool
you must think me to be
you just don't realize
how much I see.
-SEA-

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1 posted 02-02-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Lies always get discovered, how painful a verse and yet I understand completely how you feel.
My heart is with you.
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2 posted 02-02-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, how much do you see, Sea? I saw that life was a see-saw but now I see I saw it incorrectly. Oh, I see what you saw, Sea.  AARRGGHH!! I see I'm losing my mind!  

Very good poem, especially since it isn't true, based on your response to Denise. I'm glad            
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Without trust you have nothing, absolutely nothing! Great poem SEA!

Denise
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4 posted 02-02-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear Sea
It's hard to let go of your feelings and emotions when you love someone, especially when you see something going on that's hurtful, and at first you block out what you see but it doesn't go away you still see...I hope you get through this and you'll be stronger for it... Tracie    Hugs
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5 posted 02-02-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Balladeer, you're fun! This was true a long time ago. My ex-husband thought he could cheat on me, then lie. I saw right through him. That was just before I left.But, ya,I'm a lucky one, my life is wonderfully different now!
Everyone, thank you. Always such sweet wordsfrom friends!  
-SEA-
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Sometimes they only see what they wish to see Sea....man, that's almost a tongue twister  
Nice poem
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7 posted 02-03-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

(puzzled look) Yammean Balladeer had a mind to lose??? Hmmmm... I didn't know. *G*

Great poem, SEA!
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Hoot and Suthern, thanks!   -SEA
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Well Sea I'm glad you saw.... cause I now see you doing great..

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
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