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Caress By Night

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 02-02-2000 05:51 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

The blackness closing in
And I can feel
The sweetest sense of sorrow
And I know itís real
As I lay here with you
Like serpents entwined
The light fades from us
And leaves the world behind
It never seems to be healed,
This wound inside of me
Even the sanctuary of night
Keeps taunting me
I used to be of the type;
Patient, and open to this
Now time is running out
With my lover,
In the cool darkness


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Denise
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1 posted 02-03-2000 12:13 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This has a sad quality, lovely but sad  

Denise
Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 02-03-2000 11:32 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

I don't always understand others writing
This to me sounds like you have fallen
out of love and so merely enduring the
moment
Maybe I shouldn't try to always understand

Rex
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PoeticKnight
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3 posted 02-03-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

All we have is the moment...the now. Why not make the best of it?
Rosalind Palafox
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4 posted 02-03-2000 12:33 PM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Rosalind Palafox

i agree jml, but there are people who are soo blind and can't see the best thing if if were in front of them, therefore they cannot make the now the best possible....

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."
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