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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-02-02 05:33 PM


asian angel

Sitting with my friends
some old and some new
enjoying the company
and drinking a few.
Singing karaoke songs
while enjoying the view.
Looking up just a little surprised
suddenly you stood right before my eyes.
Summoned by your friend
that I'm now sitting beside
As you slowing slide over me so sensually
your softness brushes against me so gingerly
and you touch all the right places
in your journey there
awakening the desire I both feel and see
as you now sit in the booth
on the other side of me.
Her on my right
and you on my left
now losing interest in her
you now win my eyes caress
and what a lovely surprise
I'm now feeling the worlds softess thighs
arriving straight from my dreams
and now draped over mine
I must confess by this time
I was feeling totally sublime.

I must, I must look right into her eyes I know
surely I will not let her soft thighs control my hearts show.
For to look into her eyes
will reveal to me her soul
and tell me if her eyes want me
something I now need to know.
I look and she's looking right inside of me
those precious eyes now revealing caring for me.
My desires are now clear
as I thank heaven for this angel now here
a special blessing from heaven above
a man and a woman with feelings of Love.
Feels like we belong together
yet I'm still not quite sure which I like better.
Feeling the lust of her warm soft thighs
or seeing the trust and desire in her precious eyes.

Jameslee@forAnnFebruary3,2000

happy Valentine's day all you
beautiful women of Passions.



[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 02-03-2000).]

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Rosalind Palafox
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1 posted 2000-02-02 08:24 PM


Very imaginable when reading it.
*nice*
"Happy Valentine's Day" to you too...  

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-02-02 11:00 PM


Happy Valentines Day to you as well James! Thankyou for the very discriptive read.  
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-02-03 09:25 AM


Thank you Rosalind and Marilyn and may all your Valentines days be lovely and romantic with lots of chocolate and flowers and hugs and kisses.   James  
Koon
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 43
Singapore
4 posted 2000-02-03 09:37 AM


Happy Valentine's Day to you too!!!
Nice poem!!

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
5 posted 2000-02-03 01:14 PM


Nice poem and good luck with your Asian beauty!

 Nathan

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-02-03 07:22 PM


Thank you Koon for your nice comment.
Thank you Nate for your best wishes...I appreciate that.   Hope everybody has a romantic valentines day.     James

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