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surviving the moon and star's last epilogue
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surviving the moon and star's last epilogue |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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From up here on my soft and not so comfy cloud watching my friends those beautiful stars quiet ones dreaming drowning out the loud all give so much hope none can be disbarred As they twinkle high above the ocean they dazzle so you think they're near picking up on you and your emotion clouds full with all our unshed tears far below the ocean swells on atmosphere knowing when you want to ride the waves or looking for a chance to disappear how much we indicate by the way we behave Sun in all her glory peeps out to say hello dawn lifts up and clears away mist and fog limping slightly scarred from life's inferno surviving the moon and star's last epilogue The grape passes through the press to yield wine. Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom.. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sometimes the view is lighter from above the clouds.....  ..Sending you some sunshine to make it comfy...Nice one, RG..  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 02-02-2000).] |
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Miss Behavin' Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 84 |
Sunshine?... who said Sunshine???  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm on cloud 8, Rainbow. Just one more to go to get to you!!  |
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Ain' Miss Behavin' Junior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 25 |
Hey - You!!! Get offa my cloud!!..  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rainbow, I loved this wonderful view, thank you! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Cindy! I can sense the strength in this that rises above life's problems! HUGS Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Somewhere over the 'Rainbow' this angel sits and sees ... all the love through the sunshine smiling down on me. Thanks for this lovely piece of your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MissNTrope Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 43 |
Into each life a little rain must fall if ever you're to see a rainbow....  |
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Menage #1 Junior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 28 |
Hey Girl - You smilin'???  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I've suffered from the fear of heights....but seeing the beauty that you see from up there; do you have room for one more on your cloud?! Love this Rainbow...quite beautiful... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Nan: Thanks for the sunshine.. HUSG Miss Behavin': You're making me dizzy...LOL HUGS Bal: It's a big jump so make sure you have a parachute on..*g* HUSG Ain' Miss Behavin': Be generous will ya...*g* HUGS Martie: Thank you.. HUGS Denise: I wish but I try..LOL..thanks. HUGS Marge: Course it's shining down on you or else you'd be up here with me...ooops.. HUGS MissNTrope: Thank heavens rainbows are here to stay then.. HUGS Menage #1: Who wouldn't be with all these smiling faces?..LOL HUGS Pepper: Always room for you sweetheart and they float you know, so soft landing guaranteed..  HUSG The grape passes through the press to yield wine. Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom.. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Fantastic title for this one |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, RG... particularly the last verse! And ROFL @ Balladeer... he made the leap from Seventh Heaven to Cloud Eight... and then there's the slight problem of the Atlantic! *G* |
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