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surviving the moon and star's last epilogue

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RainbowGirl
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From up here on my soft and not so comfy cloud
watching my friends those beautiful stars
quiet ones dreaming drowning out the loud
all give so much hope none can be disbarred

As they twinkle high above the ocean
they dazzle so you think they're near
picking up on you and your emotion
clouds full with all our unshed tears

far below the ocean swells on atmosphere
knowing when you want to ride the waves
or looking for a chance to disappear
how much we indicate by the way we behave

Sun in all her glory peeps out to say hello
dawn lifts up and clears away mist and fog
limping slightly scarred from life's inferno
surviving the moon and star's last epilogue



 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..

© Copyright 2000 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 02-02-2000 05:12 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Sometimes the view is lighter from above the clouds.....
..Sending you some sunshine to make it comfy...Nice one, RG..    





[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 02-02-2000).]
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Sunshine?... who said Sunshine???

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3 posted 02-02-2000 06:45 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I'm on cloud 8, Rainbow. Just one more to go to get to you!!  
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4 posted 02-02-2000 06:54 PM       View Profile for Ain' Miss Behavin'   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ain' Miss Behavin'

Hey - You!!! Get offa my cloud!!..   
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Rainbow, I loved this wonderful view, thank you!
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Wonderful, Cindy! I can sense the strength in this that rises above life's problems!
HUGS

Denise
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7 posted 02-02-2000 07:39 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Somewhere over the 'Rainbow'
this angel sits and sees ...
all the love through the sunshine
smiling down on me.

Thanks for this lovely piece of your heart.
~*Marge*~


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Into each life a little rain must fall if ever you're to see a rainbow....

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Hey Girl - You smilin'???

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I've suffered from the fear of heights....but seeing the beauty that you see from up there; do you have room for one more on your cloud?!
Love this Rainbow...quite beautiful...
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Nan: Thanks for the sunshine..

HUSG

Miss Behavin': You're making me dizzy...LOL

HUGS

Bal: It's a big jump so make sure you have a parachute on..*g*

HUSG

Ain' Miss Behavin': Be generous will ya...*g*

HUGS

Martie: Thank you..

HUGS

Denise: I wish but I try..LOL..thanks.

HUGS

Marge: Course it's shining down on you or else you'd be up here with me...ooops..

HUGS

MissNTrope: Thank heavens rainbows are here to stay then..

HUGS

Menage #1: Who wouldn't be with all these smiling faces?..LOL

HUGS


Pepper: Always room for you sweetheart and they float you know, so soft landing guaranteed..

HUSG

 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..

hoot_owl_rn
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Fantastic title for this one
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13 posted 02-03-2000 02:28 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this very much, RG... particularly the last verse!

And ROFL @ Balladeer... he made the leap from Seventh Heaven to Cloud Eight... and then there's the slight problem of the Atlantic! *G*
 
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