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Love from distant past

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Danny Holloway
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0 posted 02-02-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Danny Holloway

            A long time ago, it happened
               love from distant past,
           as though destiny wove a path
               to bring us together
         You appeared, red dress, blue eyes,
               embracing smile, married
           and I, successful, outgoing, overly
                   friendly, married
              
              A long time ago, it began
                 the days of you and I
           on this road of reckless passion
                 we traveled, wantonly
             filling needs that were hidden
                  or never discussed
            every avenue of ecstacy traveled
                  fantasies fulfilled
            
             A long time ago, it happened
               when a secret love soared
         now only memories, hardly recognizable
             both still married, separately
            distance and time, years gone by
         tracks in sand, long since washed away
            
           Moments of splender, nights so tender
               longing for that distant past



 
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1 posted 02-02-2000 05:57 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Danny, while this was a lovely poem, and it painted a sad picture, I feel sorry for your wife and the other woman's husband. I just don't agree with cheating on your spouse- for any reason. Maybe because I was cheated on.-SEA
Shelley
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2 posted 02-02-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

Beautiful Danny!

All to often we find a moment of completeness in the wrong place at the right time. To some it may be adultery and for others that second cup of cappuccino.....(LOL)

Everyone longs for fulfillment be it past or present.

~Shell
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Danny,
We always seem to find what we need at a time when it can't possibly work out. This makes me very sad  
Rosalind Palafox
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4 posted 02-03-2000 11:21 AM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Rosalind Palafox

Realizing what u truly desired all along is what usually happens when it is too late. Personally i would hope you still have that same desire for your wife(if the poem is about u), but let's face reality, so many people have these same hidden feelings, so i am giving your poem a straight plus +++Rosie
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 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."
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