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jascanvey
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0 posted 2000-02-02 03:23 PM


This one is a friendship that I decided to take further, with dire consequences which I deeply regret.


Have I lost you my friend
Are we strangers again?
Didn't think it would end
Has it all been in vain?

I should've tried to be stronger
Rejected my lust
Our friendship would've been longer
And still built on trust.

Will the closeness we once had
Will it ever return?
It's making me so sad
For the past now I yearn.

Will you trust me once more
Share your hopes and your fears?
Or am I now just a chore
Like most of my peers?

Could I still make you smile
If you'd just look my way?
Should I leave you a while
To get on with your day?

If I stayed could I touch you
Run my hands on your face?
Would you reach out for me too
Link your arms round my waist?

I don't want to lose this
You gave me so much
I miss your friendship
And I'm missing your touch.



 

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-02-02 03:29 PM


Jascanvey, there are some lines in friendship that should never be crossed, and some that should be. What a balancing act! At least you took a chance on your feelings. True friends will always remain. Give it time. -SEA
jascanvey
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2 posted 2000-02-02 03:36 PM


I hope you are right SEA. He can't even look at me at the moment, but I'm hoping after he reads this he may at least try to talk!
Keep your fingers crossed - my heart is breaking without his friendship.

Denise
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3 posted 2000-02-02 07:10 PM


That's so sad, J.   I hope things work out for the best.  

Denise

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
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4 posted 2000-02-03 10:02 AM


There is a fine line between friends and lovers and its hard to know where it should stop.
Hope you get what your looking for beit a friend or a lover.
We need more love in this world
Rich

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 2000-02-03 11:15 AM


This is so sad...there is such a fine line between the two and knowing the right time or more importantly knowing if it's right at all to bridge the gap is a feat even Solomon would have problems with sometimes.
Justbleu
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6 posted 2000-02-03 11:29 AM


This is soo very sad...but very heartwarming!!  I do hope all works out...and do give him some time!!  Sometimes time heals!!  

Take Care
Bridgette


 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."

jascanvey
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England
7 posted 2000-02-03 07:12 PM


Thankyou all for your sweet comments.
You will be able to tell how it's going from the poetry I write, so you will be kept informed!!!
At this very moment in time I want him back as a friend more than anything else, I just hope that it will happen, but I have my doubts.

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