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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
What you see is what I allow, no more no less, only the wall. A mask I wear to shade my soul my pick, this pen, your only view. Its in my world that I feel safe, emotions run high, all thrown about. Only in time will I let you enter my path, my world, in all its blunder. To intrude by force you can't, I'm locked. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
In that world, no heart to see with secret hiding of the key one shall appear to set you free unlock your heart so tenderly Shelly, your poem has such intensity and written well. DH |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Shelley, unlocking that door isn't easy, definatly should be done in your own time. I really liked this poem and can relate!  -SEA |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Thanks you two for such nice comments. Danny....beautiful verse Sea...thank you so much! Its always reassuring knowing someone else can relate! ~Shelley |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Not a good place to be, I know Shelly, but someday, someone with the right key will open all the doors and set you free |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Thanks Hoot! I wrote this a few years back. It's amazing (to me anyway) that you can come so far and still be the same. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Shelley! Denise |
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