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Sunshine
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Canadian Wild

I would if I could, take a touch of black
a bit of white and gray on my back,
feathers and soft down to make me soar,
and then I would ask for one thing more.

I would if I could, take my forever love
and wing with him ever so high above
tenderly calling out to my life’s mate
together in life, then at heaven’s gate.

I would if I could, be this creature
for this lovely bird has a special feature
the geese mate for life, up to heaven’s door
and for a life’s love, I’d not ask anything more.

©KRJ
22 September, 1999



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Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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It sounds as though your heart has already taken flight.  
Nicely written1
DH

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Yes, Danny, it's been said I'm a little "Flighty!"  Thanks!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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Sunshine, Very beautiful poem. So are you saying your a wild Canadian.

Parker
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Beautiful, Sunshine!  

Denise
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No, Parker, just taking a little poetic license.  Canada lies to the north of this little Kansan.

Denise - thanks again for coming in to read!



 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow




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Wonderful Sunshine! Simply lovely....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon





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Sunshine-
You sure took wing with this one.
Wonderful !
~*Marge*~



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Pepper, Marge, thank you for reading.  This is indeed a tribute to my husband, and I would share it with him, if he didn't make fun of my "poul--try"...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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I would if I could too =)  This is great!!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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Thank you Echo!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


 
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