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Witch Poem (by my 9 year old daughter )

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Rex Allen McCoy
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My 9 year old daughter wrote this
last October
in anticipation of the coming of
Halloween


WITCH  POEM

One  dark  and  scary  night
I  crept  outside  to  a  fresh  moon  light
I  shouldn't  have  gone
It  was  very  dark
I  thought  I  saw  a  witch
but  that  was  just  the  start
~
The  witch  swooped  down
and  tied  me  to  her  broom
I  tried  to  get  free
but  what  for
I'm  doomed
~
She  took  me  to  her  castle
it  gave  me  quite  a  scare
Okay
it  was  so  scary
that  I  nearly  lost  my  hair
~
She  grabbed  me  by  the  arm
and  took  me  to  her  room
She  chained  me  to  her  table
and  left  me  with  her  broom
~
I  looked  around  the  bedroom
and  then  I  saw  a  tool
I  don't  know  what  its  called
but  it  looked  pretty  cool
~
It  was  laying  right  beside  me
so  I  grabbed  it  in  my  hand
I  used  it  on  the  chains
and  they  broke
now  ain't  that  grand
~
I  jumped  down  off  the  table
and  took  the  broom  with  me
I  said  some  magic  words
and  out  the  window
Weeeeeeeeee
~
Past  the  houses  moon  and  stars
and  home  to  bed
where  I  dream  of  chocolate  bars

~~~~
Jennifer McCoy Oct 99

© Copyright 2000 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 02-02-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! I can see that she inherited her Daddy's talent for writing! This is wonderful!  

Denise
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2 posted 02-02-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Delightfully spooky! (and funny!)

Great Job, Jennifer!

Claire
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3 posted 02-02-2000 02:51 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Rex, your daughter is talented! Jennifer- GREAT JOB!!! This is fantastic! I hope you keep writting. -SEA
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4 posted 02-02-2000 04:50 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Jennifer, this is wonderful ! I love it  
JOY 14
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5 posted 02-02-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Yes, Jennifer. Don't stop writing!  This reminds me of my poems at your age, which isn't too long ago!    


Joy

[This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 02-02-2000).]
Marilyn
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6 posted 02-02-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Rex..Your daughter is adorable! Jennifer...great writing, don't ever stop!!
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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Dear Jennifer,

     You write very well!  I want to encourage you to keep writing, because you have a real talent!
Rex Allen McCoy
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8 posted 02-03-2000 12:47 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Thanks everyone ... she reads a lot
including my poems
She has written about ten poems
in the past six months and seems to
enjoy it. I'll get her to read all
the mail here and I know she'll be
very happy.

Thanks again
Rex
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9 posted 02-03-2000 06:28 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This is a wonderful poem Jennifer  
Will you share some more of your pieces?
Really enjoyed this!!!!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
  Shannon


  




[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 02-04-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 02-03-2000 07:04 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Just
Enough
New
Nice
Intriguing
Feeling
Ever
Radiant

Jennifer,of all the
Halloween poems I've read,
yours keeps playing
in my head.

Love ~*Marge*~



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Echo Rhayne
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11 posted 02-04-2000 02:02 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

HEY!!!!!  So it was YOU that stole my broom!!  That wasnt very nice hehe  J/K  This is great and I too think that you have a wonderful talent and I hope that you keep writing!!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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12 posted 02-05-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Alina Le Ann   Email Alina Le Ann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alina Le Ann's Home Page   View IP for Alina Le Ann

This is very good!
If Jennifer is only nine and can already accopmlish this....then she will most definately become famous for her writing!!




Alina Le Ann
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Looks like another up and coming talent... )
Rex Allen McCoy
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14 posted 02-06-2000 05:11 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Thanks everyone ...Jenns' head is swollen
she read most of the responces here and is telling all her friends to read this group
She even told her teacher at school
she is going to post some more, but the web site only alows one person per e-mail address
so we need to get her a hotmail account

Rex}<{{{{o>
watch for her ( minni poet )
Dark Angel
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15 posted 02-06-2000 06:05 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Jennifer, what a lovely poem you have written, well Done!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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16 posted 02-06-2000 07:02 AM       View Profile for Alias   Email Alias   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alias

hey jennifer  
great poem... i could hardly even write when i was nine, let alone write a cool poem! keep up the good work,
Alias
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17 posted 02-07-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for arien78   Email arien78   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for arien78

Hey , Jennifer...
Loved your poem girl.Its so amazing,you are just 9 and yet so talented.you are a prodigy.
Your Dad must be a real proud man.you really have got it in you to become a great poet.
love
Siva.
HelmutB
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18 posted 02-07-2000 02:29 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Hey Jennifer you doing fine
You're outdoing your dad  
Pretty scary there
I'm way impressed
You certainly are blessed

and so is your Dad  

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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My very first poem! Hehe
 
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