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WhtDove
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0 posted 2000-02-02 01:01 PM


Soon you'll be in new surroundings
And doing what you love
This is your dream come true
Sent from the Lord above

I wish you the safest journey
May your horizon always shine
May your dreams come true
As these hills you start to climb

It's quite the new adventure
Walking into the unseen
It may be a little scary
When you're somewhere inbetween

I know what you are leaving
And your tears will fall no doubt
Remember love goes with you
In the new life that you scout

My thoughts are always with you
And my prayers they will be too
As God fills you with His presence
Know that I'll be missing you!

I wish you nothing but the best
I'll miss you very much
Don't forget your toothbrush (hehe)
And remember, STAY IN TOUCH!



PS. Make sure that Dr Pepper don't come through your nose while you're away.  LOL  Love ya sweetie!  GREAT BIG HUGS TO YA!!!

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-02 01:04 PM


I'll miss you too, Melanie! Rebecca speaks my heart in this beautiful poem! Please visit us as soon as you can! I wish you the best!!

Beautiful poem, Rebecca!!

Denise

Sven
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2 posted 2000-02-02 01:07 PM


Add my name to that list!!

Wonderful poem Rebecca. . . and Melanie, no matter where you go. . . you will always have a home here with us. . .

---------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


WhtDove
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3 posted 2000-02-02 01:29 PM


Thanks Denise and Sven! She will really be missed!  

So many here that love and care for you Melanie, you know you have a home here!  

Alicat
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4 posted 2000-02-02 01:34 PM


Melanie...I do sincerely hope that whatever it is you seek, wherever it may be, will bring you happiness, fulfillment, and peace of mind.  Know that you will always have a place by the fire, here at PiP.  

Alicat

RainbowGirl
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5 posted 2000-02-02 01:38 PM


Melanie: Grasp life with both hands for we can never go back in time..

Big HUGS

 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..


Balladeer
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6 posted 2000-02-02 01:45 PM


Best of luck, Melanie. We'll always be here.......
Martie
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7 posted 2000-02-02 01:54 PM


To travel a new road that lies ahead is one of the best gifts that life can give.  
Pepper
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8 posted 2000-02-02 01:55 PM


Rebecca, your poem is really very
beautiful...
And I wish for you Melanie, all the
peace and happiness that you so
deserve.....

RG...I love your thoughts..wonderful..

Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA
9 posted 2000-02-02 03:08 PM


*sniff*  *BIG HUGGLES*  Thank you Rebecca this is so sweet!  And don't worry I wont forget my toothbrush hehe, that is if I can remmeber where I hid it from you hehe!  

Everyone else...thnk you for your best wishes and so forth, it means a lot, and I know I always have a home here at PiP..hmmmm maybe I will try moving into the computer hehe j/k  I wouldnt fit!  

I am going to miss everyone so much and will get back as soon as I can!  

Rebecca, of course I will keep in touch, I got your addy, and I will write as soon as I find time!  *hugs*  Thank you again!  Love you much!


 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


WhtDove
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10 posted 2000-02-02 03:57 PM


Melanie, better start diggin then, maybe ya hid it in the toilet eh? hehe (inside joke guys)...your welcome Hon!  Sorry we didn't get a chance to talk last night for too long.

Sniff, I will miss you dearly...and will be awaiting that note from you! Good Luck Melanie and God be with ya sweetie!!!!!!

Pepper thank you!  

Dark Angel
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11 posted 2000-02-02 04:14 PM


Angel Girl, this is a beautiful poem!!!

Melanie, I wish you all the peace and happiness that you truly deserve. I will miss you, and please visit us as soon as you can. *HUGS*

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Sally S.
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Ohio
12 posted 2000-02-02 04:18 PM


Awwww, very sweet!!

Don't forget to WRITE!!  hehehe  Take care, Melanie.  ((((hugs))))

Munda
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13 posted 2000-02-02 04:56 PM


Wonderful poem Rebecca  

Echo, the best of luck to you and let us hear something soon. Hugs  

Isis
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14 posted 2000-02-02 06:07 PM


Wonderful farewell poem Rebecca!
Echo this home will always have a light on for you when you return.
Good luck hon.  (HUGS)

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



deleeme
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15 posted 2000-02-02 06:19 PM


As You go Melanie, remember you're taking with you a part of our Life, and are leaving behind a lot of good poems & memories.  I pray that things work our well for you and that you will be crossing our path again, not so far down the road.

And Thank You, Rebecca, for the Fine send off of our well-beloved and mutual friend.

A (((Hug))) to the both of you,   David

WhtDove
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16 posted 2000-02-02 06:51 PM


Thank you all! Hugs back to ya David!  See Mel, print this out and take it with ya!
Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2000-02-02 07:14 PM


Melanie-

Reach for the stars !
Twinkle and shine for us once in a while.
You will be missed by many.
God bless.
Love ~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
18 posted 2000-02-02 09:44 PM


Beautiful poem Whtdove. Good luck Echo....please stay in touch  

 Have you ever noticed
That the words...
"Goodbye"
"I'm sorry"
"I love you"
Are so easy to pronounce
...Yet so hard to say
~Javan

PhaerieChild
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19 posted 2000-02-02 10:31 PM


Rebecca, beautiful poem and Melanie you will be missed. Come back when you can and tell us of your new adventures. I will miss you. ((((HUGS))))

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



WhtDove
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20 posted 2000-02-02 11:21 PM


Thanks all! I can hardly keep the tears from coming!  Dry those eyes Melanie, we'll be right here hon!  
Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA
21 posted 2000-02-03 05:22 AM


*sniff*  Thanks and hugs everyone!!  As the day is getting closer I am getting more and more anxious to leave, yet more and more frightened and nervous too!  Rebecca, ok I dried my eyes, now you dry yours too =u)  Though dangit, I just dried them and they're all soggy again, these waterworks haven't seemed to stop for the past few days, but I will admit, it feels good to cry, haven't done that in a while!  I will miss everyone, and will be back soon to share everything with you all!  But right now, I need to get to sleep!  *yawn*  

There's a star up in the sky with my name on it, when you look to the stars, please think of me, and I will do the same! *  

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


Justbleu
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22 posted 2000-02-04 02:14 AM


This was beautiful....what a wonderful goodbye to a wonderful person!!  You will be missed while you're away Melanie!!  Hurry back, K??  

Take Care and God Bless
Bridgette


 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."

WhtDove
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23 posted 2000-02-04 10:12 AM


Awww Melanie, buy stock in tissue...hehe
No, I know it's rough going, but just think after you've been gone for a while, you'll actually start to miss home!  

There is a star in the sky with your name on it, but I don't need to look there to remember you!    Hugs Melanie...prayers, and the best of luck!

wayoutwalt
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24 posted 2000-02-04 10:22 AM


awww melanie thaz my lil 3 yr olds name im not too good at names o yuh echo is to me yuh
special lil devil to be missed and this is a fine tribute yuh

LngJhnAg
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25 posted 2000-02-04 10:41 AM


Good luck Melanie, wherever you go.  

As for you, Rebecca, beautiful poem and *woohoo* terrific peekshure, too!  At last, a face with the name.

LngJhnAg
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26 posted 2000-02-04 10:42 AM


Good luck Melanie, wherever you go.  

As for you, Rebecca, beautiful poem and *woohoo* terrific peekshure, too!  At last, a face with the name.

wayoutwalt
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27 posted 2000-02-04 10:46 AM


hahahahaha double post for lngjhn hahahahaha hehehehe amateur o yuh
wayoutwalt
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28 posted 2000-02-04 10:46 AM


hahahahaha double post for lngjhn hahahahaha hehehehe amateur o yuh
WhtDove
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29 posted 2000-02-04 10:50 AM


LOL@ you Walt!  Looks as though you fallin in the same category there aren't ya?  haha

LJA, thank you! And a big  

Nate Dogg
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30 posted 2000-02-04 12:02 PM


So beautiful and so heart-touching!

 Nathan

WhtDove
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31 posted 2000-02-04 08:51 PM


Tonight is the night Melanie!  You get some sleep, and drive safe, and pray all the way there! hehehe....did ya ever find that darn toothbrush did ya?  I love ya Mel, and I will miss you terribly!  The biggest bear, bone crushing hugs to you!  You will be in my prayers always! mmmmmmmwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaahhhhhh
Echo Rhayne
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32 posted 2000-02-05 12:31 PM


*sniff sniff sniff*  I'll miss you 'becca *HUGE BONE CRUSHING BEAR HUGS*  I love you bunches, and I will try my hardest to *sniff* get a letter out to you!  And yes, I finally foudn that toothbrush, I stuck it under my matress hiding it from you ehhe *sniff*  TTFN  *hugs*

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


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