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Daniel's Song!

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 02-02-2000 09:51 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

  Daniel's Song


Watch you as you grow
Run around to and fro'
You are my one and all
Love you forevermore
As bright as the sun
You are my clever one
My sweet little boy
You bring me much Joy


I love you Daniel
You're my pride and Joy
Sweet little Daniel
Beautiful boy!

This is Daniel's Song
To him this does belong
Now and forever more
Remember me when you fall
When you become a man
I'm sure you'll understand
Deep within your heart
Our love will never part

I love you Daniel
You're my pride and Joy
Sweet little Daniel
Beautiful boy!


Mummy!




 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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A beautiful song from a mother's heart! Simply beautiful, Dark Angel!  
Denise
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DA this was so very precious! What a treasure from his mummy!  Aww!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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This is so precious, he's one lucky young fellow  
RainbowGirl
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DA: ohhhhhhh...I'm reading all the tear jerkers today..

HUSG

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This is so sweet and heart spoken.  Loved it!

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So sweet.  I'm sure he'll cherish it always and especialy when he's all grown up.
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Puts me in mind of Mr. Holland's Opus - if you haven't seen it, you would like it, I am sure.  Well Done.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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Awwwwwww DA *snif, snif* this is so beautiful - you write from the heart such beautiful pieces. D is definately a lucky boy to have such a wonderful soul as his Mum. I bet he would sing back to you:

Oh Mummy, Mummy,
My tender one, my sweet,
I will love you beyond forever,
From my golden heart I speak,
Because you are to me,
The blazing sun in my universe,
You bring me life, love and happiness,
More than all the treasure in the world are you worth.
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Tugging at my heartstrings.
~*Marge*~


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Thank you all so very much, this is indeed precious to me. Thanks for your kind replies.  
Moonshine, thanks for your poem, it's beautiful and you are right, he does sing back to me.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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"I love you Daniel
You're my pride and Joy
Sweet little Daniel
Beautiful boy!"

see, a fine example of true love...the love you have for your son is beautiful...and i know how it feels! those little men are a journey to the end of the rainbow...always met with a pot of gold
Dark Angel
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12 posted 05-11-2004 06:58 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Dawn, thank you, goodness this is an oldie hehe and I used to rhyme then  
Speaking of rainbows.. we saw a huge one on the way to school this morning



M

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

 
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