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fc
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since 2000-01-18
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0 posted 2000-02-02 09:41 AM


wanna go for a ride?

little low and red
my stereo system
has two doors and
four wheels
the slightest pressure
urges it closer to the edge
tempting life to take
me up on the dare.
ain't eight grand?
I have only taken it to
oh...lets say...seven
and
a half





[This message has been edited by fc (edited 02-02-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-02 09:57 AM


Be careful going around those curves!! This is cute, fc!    

Denise

fc
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2 posted 2000-02-02 03:20 PM


well driving it is a blast, so I am glad the poem came off fun....thanks
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