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The Shadows I Make
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Shadows I Make ~Marge Tindal~ The shadows I make as through life I traipse will cling to my path no matter what path I take I cannot dodge the shadows so I strive to see that the shadows I leave don't come back to haunt me in the shadows of my memory ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Marge! The best way to live!  Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
haunting shadows, very real for sure! Nicely written! DH |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, True and I like this. *L* Sy |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I like how ya put it! True! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Liked this one a lot~ Goes along the lines of burning your bridges, I believe~ (A lesson I learned just last year- never burn them!) Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done. Enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Short, sweet, simple. GREAT! |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
I enjoy this very much the first time. The second time (over coffee with the girls) was even better. It makes you stop and say..."How True". |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
up late, we we're hoping those shadows wouldn't be following us too. Thank God for His pictures and protections... It's terrible that we can't know who is who..! M. Tindal we love you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise- Thanks, gal. Danny- I appreciate your thoughts. Seymour- You know I'm glad you like it. WhiteDove- It is true, isn't it? We should always be aware of the shadows we leave. Marie- I'm glad you liked it. Mike- Thanks. Sunshine- Well, I have a short, sweet, simple shadow. Shelley- What a thoughtful thing to say. How wonderful that you share us with 'the girls'. Lucky- Awwwwww ! You two are in my heart too. I KNOW who I am ... and I KNOW who my friends are ... count you two in BIG TIME ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So true...and I echo Denise Marge... Enjoyed this bit of wisdom very much! Well done! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Oh how wise, such words from thee of shadows, cast, so fittingly when stray we from the path we know our shadow follows, e're we go. Wonderful poem, Marge! How true! Claire |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like how you worded this, nicely done |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
When Kronos' art unmakes us, each the same, The shadow cast is all that shall remain. --Me (hehe) An intriguing thought, and one I have shared. Well done, Marge! --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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