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Gentle Love

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tori
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What a funny face you show to me
Laughter lightened with glee
As each day I look at thee
I bask in loves wondrous sea

With these hands that lay upon my face
Gently brushing my lips
I feel the warmth of bright light you shine
And I become full, enriching my spirit with all of you

Your words sing out to me, reaching deep beyond my being
To the universe where wings fly and still the hearts flow
I am blessed to have held it, for this instant
As forever more, this magic I will know

Tori 2000




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I've not wasted one drop of ink
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1 posted 02-02-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So sweet and tender, Tori! Very lovely!

Denise
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this is really beautiful! i loved it alot!
~ViXeN~
tori
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3 posted 02-02-2000 08:26 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks much for reading.. glad you enjoyed!

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
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Laurel
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4 posted 02-04-2000 12:31 PM       View Profile for Laurel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laurel

tori, this is a very romantic poem!
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5 posted 02-05-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Tori, gentle indeed! How very sweet! -SEA
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6 posted 02-05-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Tori,
Very romantic, enjoyed the poem.
tori
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7 posted 02-05-2000 08:06 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks Sea and Sey...oops ...  

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm
hoot_owl_rn
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How wonderfully romantic  
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Tori, tori, tori, big sigh!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
Breathe~
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Oh to be in love again...*sigh*

What a wonderful tribute... )
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11 posted 02-06-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tori-
This is lovely.
~*Marge*~


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tori
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12 posted 02-06-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thank you all for reading and your kind words.
See Dove.. once in a while the good stuff slips out...... )

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm
Patrick B
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13 posted 02-06-2000 11:39 AM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

The things love makes us do and say....beautiful

 hello darkness my old friend

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