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Forbidden Fate..........................#1

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Sally S.
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since 06-07-99
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Ohio


0 posted 02-01-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sally S.

This was the first poem I posted in the new forums.  

His name came to me through a gentle summer breeze.
A voice near a whisper. A hearts silent plea.
A magical union powerless through vast space.
Twilight questions of what brought us to this place.

Overwhelming mystery makes it hard to stay away.
A time, a place and where to meet...I would choose the day.
Imprisoned by the longing, fate finally tips his hat.
Four rings you see won't stop us..it's far too late for that.

His eyes capture mine. First kiss ensued thereafter.
I drown within his soul right then...amidst the nervous laughter.
Abundant time was not ours. It ended all too soon.
Brief meetings we shall only have each night amongst the moon.



© Copyright 2000 Sally - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 02-01-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Talk about a coincidence! I was just reading this one this morning that I found so easily using the new search function!!! This is beautiful, Sally! Simply breathtaking!  

Denise
Nan
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2 posted 02-02-2000 07:33 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Geesh - I love this "deja vu" stuff... Sally, your work is all great - and certainly this is just a little teaser.... You Passionate Poets... enjoy - maybe we can get Sal to post more often...

Denise - I like the search function this way too...
tori
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since 06-18-99
Posts 521
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


3 posted 02-02-2000 08:43 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Sally these words speak to the hearts of many I'm sure... great job with this one..

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


4 posted 02-02-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Sally this was wonderful! You described it so very well!  
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla


5 posted 02-02-2000 10:27 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sally,
You cought my eye, you caught my mind.
You caught a rind of poetic kind.
Well done.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


6 posted 02-02-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Breath takingly beautiful as well as romantic  
Balladeer
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7 posted 02-02-2000 12:35 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

How great to see you back, Sally!!  
Uncork that Mateus and stay for a while!!!
Sally S.
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Posts 887
Ohio


8 posted 02-02-2000 04:14 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Just a trip down memory lane, here.  Though by looking at this along with my new pieces, I haven't changed all that much...~sigh~  

Thank you Denise...you actually looked up my "stuff" eh? hehehe

Nan, I'm not going anywhere.  You guys'll be sick of me, I promise.  

Tori, yes...emotions felt by many.  Thank you for the reply.

WhtDove,  Thank you for the kind reply.  Glad you like.  

Sy...I think that's your first poetic reply..
To me.  hee hee.  (Oh STOP me, PLEASE!!)  Thank you!

Ruth, Thank you, kind one.  I'm happy you enjoyed it.

Mike,  What's a mateus wit' you?  
Huh?  What da?    Dernit...gotta go get my dictionary now...FOOEY.  Um....thanks, I think?  (I'm going to keep "buggin'" you, so get used to it.)  ((((huggles)))) and lisses.  
Soleil
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9 posted 02-02-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for Soleil   Email Soleil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Soleil

just checking in and wow, what a blast from the past.
Beautiful.
Laurel
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since 02-01-2000
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10 posted 02-04-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for Laurel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laurel

This is one of the prettiest poems I have read so far!              
spiked
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since 01-13-2000
Posts 886
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11 posted 02-04-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Very beautiful. Romantic and longing.

Rich
 
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