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We'll put the clocks into reverse

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Master
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0 posted 02-01-2000 09:20 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

The window leaned against the moon
To me, today has made no sense
The clocks were running on their hands
They brought black holes into my room
Tomorrow I will be all right
Tomorrow may not come so soon
The bright illusion of the moon
Will slowly fade into the night
For all the worst and for the better
Ill find you beneath my skin
You will eternally glow within
This way well always be together
And I shall write another verse
Before this night comes to an end
If I could only hold your hand
Wed put the clocks into reverse
The pale moon would shrink in size
The sun would once again appear
I would wake up and youd be near
The night would melt inside our eyes



 I fell in love and kept on falling

© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 02-01-2000 09:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

WOW! What can I say?! I love this! The desire to turn back time never sounded so poetic!!!  You certainly are talented, Master!

Denise
Master
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2 posted 02-01-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you Denise, I'm blushing. (I'm not really that talented, I don't deserve so much applause from someone who writes as well as you do)

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 02-01-2000).]
Kevin
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3 posted 02-01-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

I think im becoming a bit of a master groupie hehe

liked this much
clocks running on there hands
why did that make silly pictures in my head lol
Angel
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4 posted 02-01-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel

Wow, I'm with Kevin, I'm going to become a Master groupie too. You are simply awesome  . I loved the poem.

 ~Susie~

Master
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5 posted 02-02-2000 06:44 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

WOw, I got groupies now?! You're begining to convince me that I may be a decent poet. Thank you!
tori
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6 posted 02-02-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

I have searched the arcives!! ... far more then decent I would say... and again to this one... Bravo... !

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
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Denise
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7 posted 02-02-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Decent is certainly an understatement!  
Master
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8 posted 02-02-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you Tori and Denise!
hoot_owl_rn
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This likes me much  
Master
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Me thanks you much for liking this!
 
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