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Loneliness

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Zelda
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0 posted 02-01-2000 07:25 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda


Loneliness,
A grey figure shrouded in an endless black robe,
Carrying the aroma of bad memories and tears.
It's voice is silent- so very eery,
I am made to feel alone in the world-
A soul survivor wandering scared.

       (FYI- I'm not lonely!   )

© Copyright 2000 Zelda - All Rights Reserved
Me2
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1 posted 02-01-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for Me2   Email Me2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Me2

Very Nice, Zelda!  I can feel the dark ... is there going to be more to this story?  For my sake, don't stop here!

thanks!
Paul
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 02-01-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Zelda,
Well done enjoyed the read.
Lorelei54
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3 posted 02-01-2000 07:49 PM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

arrgghhhh, lil lassie - ye be not lonely, hey???  Incidently, this poem left me hanging, and I suspect other people, too!  NO FAIR!

Welcome to the Forums.  I know you will find many friends in here are truly terrific people.
Denise
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Welcome to Passions, Zelda! This sure sounds like lonely to me!! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
Zelda
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5 posted 02-01-2000 08:39 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

Ahh... I promise I will finish this!!

Had to cut it short... dogs were whining to "go"!!  Told you I wasn't lonely  

So, look for more later.. I'm thinking I'll call it Wandering....

Z
Gene
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Welcome, Zelda.

Very nice start. I'm anxious to see where you go with this.

BTW, you don't have to be dark and lonely to write about it.

~Gene  
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7 posted 02-01-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Zelda, Welcome! I also felt like there was more to this..... will look for it!   -SEA
mariee66
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Girlfriend~

Like it so far~

Should have made the guys wait!~

Marie~
Sally S.
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9 posted 02-02-2000 12:16 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Welcome, Zelda...I hope you find a home here.  It's a wonderful place.

Now, about the ending...... hehehe  
fc
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10 posted 02-02-2000 09:38 AM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fc

just had to welcome you, nice poem, nice name, lol, I used to be addicted to the nintendo game Zelda....had to quit cold turkey to get away from it lolol...
Zelda
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11 posted 02-08-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

Well, now that my essays are finished, I can thank....
u_gene-  
SEA- Almost finished with it  
Marie- I see you everyday    
Sally S- Thanks for the welcome... happy ending?  
fc- I still am addicted to that game... LOL!
 
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