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B-B-D (Challenge from Saxoness)

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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 02-01-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Slipping into the wetness,
while the music plays softly
in the background.
Sweat, stinging her eyes,
while the glow of the candle
lights the room all around.

A bottle of champagne
sits alone on the floor.
While the secrets lay hiden
behind the closed door.

Her naked body
soft as velvet roses
glistens from the heat.
While the soothing aroma
gently sweeps her
off her feet.

The stress of the day
becomes a far distant thought,
'cause comfort and peace
is all that she sought.

She lays there in peace
while she bids her stressed day
one last final adieu.
She never thought
that her wildest dreams
would ever quite come true.

She lays there in her bubble bath
the room is full of steam...
She soon awoke and was quite depressed
for it had only been a dream!


(Ok Saxoness, I finally got it finished, and I know it isnt exactly what you wanted, but dangit, this is all I could do  )




 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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Denise
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1 posted 02-01-2000 05:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Geeze...how come I never have dreams like that?!   I enjoyed this, Melanie!

Denise
Saxoness
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2 posted 02-01-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Echo,

Fabulous! I think it turned out wonderfully. And I also think I'm going to go take a bubble bath....


 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Marilyn
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3 posted 02-01-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Well done Echo! Hmmm a buble bath sounds great right about now.  
WhtDove
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4 posted 02-01-2000 05:20 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Melanie, your certainly made it an enticing dream! hehe...bubble baths get ready...I think every women here is gonna go take one!
Back off guys...hahaha

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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