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Balladeer's Bible Babes

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Marilyn
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0 posted 02-01-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marilyn

I saw a great white master,
His verbage was quite clear,
He came a little closer and
He whispered in my ear.

He said he was a preacher,
His name he never said.
He offered me a place where,
I always would be fed.

I thought about his offer,
You see my life's been rough.
'Cause he was a peacher man,
I thought I'd call his bluff.

He took me to this hotel,
Where I was bathed and fed.
He gave me some new clothing,
I slept in a warm, soft bed.

He talked about my savior,
A price I had to pay.
He asked me if I would go,
Or if I had to stay?

Stay I did, I tell you,
He had me on a hook.
If I left where would I go?
My heart he all but took.

Now listen to me ladies,
Now listen to me gals.
I'm making lots of money,
Dancin' for his pals.

Be aware of preachers,
Of one be so afriad.
He is such a master,
And he MUST be obeyed.

The sign outside his haven,
The one that has me caged.
The sign that is a becon,
Says, "Balladeer's Bible Babes".

Well Mike I finally worte it. Did I do good master??? *adoring look*...lol




[This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 02-01-2000).]
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Pepper
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1 posted 02-01-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This is great Marilyn!   lolol
I can hardly wait for 'Deer's reply!

Munda
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2 posted 02-01-2000 05:46 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Marilyn, you're getting better every day ! What do you think....would he want to be my Valentine ?  
Christopher
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3 posted 02-01-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

ROFLMBO!!!

Hey Bal- How much you charge to watch your "babes???"  

Good one Marilyn!!!
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 02-01-2000 06:47 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

LOL... well done Marilyn!!!  Of course you know you are just asking for it with this one.    Have fun on the stage!
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5 posted 02-01-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Marilyn-

Wonderful.  YOU GO 'BABE' !
Balladeer will be ready with a reply,
of that I'm sure.
Can't wait !



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WhtDove
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Take cover Marilyn, it's coming...how'd ya think up Bible babes? haha
Nan
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7 posted 02-01-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I was really suspicious about what he was doing with all that free time of his.... Now I know...
Marilyn
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8 posted 02-02-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Thanks everyone. This was a blast to write.

Andrew...I like the stage...lol

Rebecca...Mike and I were talking about a month back. "DE's Travelling Salvation Show" came up in the conversation. Some how Mike threw Balladeer's Bible babes out and I told him I had to write that one. Well after all this time here it is...lol.


nan...How do you think he could afford that new car??...lol
Rex Allen McCoy
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9 posted 02-02-2000 01:29 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Hi Marilyn
I detect a slightly devious smile
behind this poem
Being new here I guess
I need a bit of time to adjust
to the jest of things

Rex
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Oh my....are you Balladeer's babe now good Lady Marilyn.  Lots of crushed hearts at that news.  Great showing by the way.  

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL


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11 posted 02-02-2000 11:58 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Gee, Marilyn, not that you've let our secret out, I guess I have to respond and give you the credit you so righteously deserve  

Great work, lady!!!
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12 posted 02-02-2000 12:06 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

ROFLMAO... and she looks so sweet and innocent! LOL. Great job, Marilyn...
Seymour Tabin
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Marilyn,
I read Balladeers answer before I read your poem. Now I understand. You did a wonderful job but beware the preacher man. He has a mind like a brainpan. Once he dips his pen
and the oil begins to flow. You never know
where he'll hit, high or low. *L* Sy
Marilyn
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Rex..there is nothing slight about this devious smile!  

Sir Knight..I don't know how many will be crushed but thanks.  

Mike....Gee thanks..I think.  

suthern..I AM sweet and innocent!!  

Sy....I am not afraid of Mike. what can a bunch of hot air do??..lol
hoot_owl_rn
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ROFLMAO
Isis
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16 posted 02-03-2000 05:29 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

LOL Good one Maz  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


 
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