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Marilyn
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since 09-26-1999
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0 posted 02-01-2000 03:09 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marilyn

Mop the floor
and scrub the walls
Don't forget
The toilet stalls!
Strip the beds
And clean the sheets
Don't forget
To cook them beets!
Do the dishes
Wash the clothes
Don't forget
The cookie doughs!
Cleaning, scrubbing
Here and there
OH NO!!
Did I forget the underware?
I'm so tired
I'm so beet
I am simply
Run off my feet!

Anyone want to be my valentine? Come on Baby! Bring the wine!...*lol*

Sorry just had to send out that last comment. :0
© Copyright 2000 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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since 10-08-1999
Posts 3629
The Hague, The Netherlands


1 posted 02-01-2000 03:13 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

ROTFLMAO Marilyn ! Exactly the Valentine I was looking for ! Except he has to know how to make FUDGE too       

[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 02-01-2000).]
Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


2 posted 02-01-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Great poem, Marilyn.
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


3 posted 02-01-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Umm... gee Marilyn, you make it sound SO enticing, that I want to run... way far-far away!!!!!

)
Balladeer
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4 posted 02-01-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Gee, Marilyn, can I get you a cool drink....before you get back to work?
Denise
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5 posted 02-01-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great one Marilyn!! Whew...I'm tired now!!

Denise
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6 posted 02-06-2000 12:16 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Hummm?.  Are you busy Marilyn?  I think you may appear to busy for a Valentine   Very cute poem

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL


Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores


7 posted 02-06-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Marilyn-
First ....   LOL
This cracks me up !

Secondly .... we've sure had lots
of laughs to brighten up this little
corner of the internet.
Thanks to you, it feels lighter.
My appreciation for sure.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dark Angel
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8 posted 02-06-2000 07:23 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Marilyn WOW this is great, very tiring lol
great stuff!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
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9 posted 02-06-2000 07:33 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Please everybody, note Balladeer's remark!
THAT is REALITY!
So is the poem. At least it was in my house. Some day I'll write a poem about the underwear incident-too funny!
Great poem, Marilyn!
Liz
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


10 posted 02-06-2000 07:40 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Roses are Red and Valentines too
this heartwarming wish
I'm conjuring for you

    

Rex}<{{{{o>
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


11 posted 02-06-2000 11:00 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Too funny Marilyn, with a schedule like that, who has time for romance ?  
RobertB
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12 posted 02-06-2000 07:23 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

good one Mar......you go girl!
 
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