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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Mop the floor and scrub the walls Don't forget The toilet stalls! Strip the beds And clean the sheets Don't forget To cook them beets! Do the dishes Wash the clothes Don't forget The cookie doughs! Cleaning, scrubbing Here and there OH NO!! Did I forget the underware? I'm so tired I'm so beet I am simply Run off my feet! Anyone want to be my valentine? Come on Baby! Bring the wine!...*lol* Sorry just had to send out that last comment. :0 |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
ROTFLMAO Marilyn ! Exactly the Valentine I was looking for ! Except he has to know how to make FUDGE too   [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 02-01-2000).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great poem, Marilyn. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Umm... gee Marilyn, you make it sound SO enticing, that I want to run... way far-far away!!!!!  ) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, Marilyn, can I get you a cool drink....before you get back to work? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great one Marilyn!! Whew...I'm tired now!! Denise |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Hummm?. Are you busy Marilyn? I think you may appear to busy for a Valentine  Very cute poemI used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marilyn- First .... LOL This cracks me up ! Secondly .... we've sure had lots of laughs to brighten up this little corner of the internet. Thanks to you, it feels lighter. My appreciation for sure. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Marilyn WOW this is great, very tiring lol great stuff!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Please everybody, note Balladeer's remark! THAT is REALITY! So is the poem. At least it was in my house. Some day I'll write a poem about the underwear incident-too funny! Great poem, Marilyn! Liz |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Roses are Red and Valentines too this heartwarming wish I'm conjuring for you   Rex}<{{{{o> |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Too funny Marilyn, with a schedule like that, who has time for romance ? |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
good one Mar......you go girl! |
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