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The Day Has Come |
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Laurel Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 22 |
Sing sweet to me your lover's song Hold close my heart however long It takes to prove I'm safe, my love And carry me to stars above. The universe you give to me Your words assure you'll always be Beside me here through thick and thin At last I'm ready, let's begin. The day has come to say 'I do' To vow our love 'till time is through. [This message has been edited by Laurel (edited 02-01-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Laurel! Sweet poem! Please check your email for a special welcome!  Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a wonderful way to start your trip into Passions! Sounds like you have the world by its tail! Welcome, Welcome! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This is a lovely introduction to this Pasions family of ours. A most hardy welcome to you! |
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d.schultz Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 43 |
Welcome To Passions.... What a great beginning You will have to let us know the answer to I do . Look forward to reading more poems from you.... ds |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I have a daughter who is getting married soon and I'm going to give her a copy of your poem. Nicely written DH |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!My knees are knocking, and I'm not even getting married!!! (Braver than I!!!) |
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Laurel Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 22 |
Thank you everybody for your nice comments! |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Laurel, this is great!!(she says while clapping) Welcome! This is so sweet.  - SEA |
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Laurel Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 22 |
Thank you SEA! |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Although it's been 28 years, your poem made me think of that special day so long ago. And through those years, your words would still apply. Much happiness always |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A very lovely poem to start out your walk through Passions. Welcome and keep writing poems loke this Liz |
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d.schultz Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 43 |
Laurel~~~ Would like to see more of your writings.... Enjoyed this one very much ds |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
WELCOME! and live happily ever after. SWEET! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a wonderfully romantic introduction to Passions. Welcome |
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