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Arabian Knight
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0 posted 02-01-2000 01:57 PM       View Profile for Arabian Knight   Email Arabian Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Arabian Knight

Alone I sit and face the sea
waves so vibrant ..birds so free
winds that dance with ecstacy
I sit alone my dear...

I wish i was the flowing wave
to flow to your remote enclave
and be your eyes' most humble slave
and gaurd you from your fear...

I wish i was a bird of grace
to fly throughout the open space
and land beside your lucious face
and wipe your dripping tear...

I wish i was the wind so light
to blow across the gloomy night
and surely we can then unite
and prove our love sincere...

Still alone I sit and pray
will we meet another day ?
and ask myself is there a way
to move our bodies near...?

Only hopes are what remain
and only hopes will keep me sane
and help control my burning pain
until your eyes appear...



[This message has been edited by Arabian Knight (edited 02-02-2000).]
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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 02-01-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

This is poetic sweetness in all its Glory. Your skill is masterful, your language  seductive. Excellent, to my way of thinking.

Welcome!

Claire
Marilyn
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2 posted 02-01-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Well Sir Knight. You have done it again.   I do believe we have found another hopless romatic to grace our boards. *sigh*
tulip
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3 posted 02-02-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

How beautiful...sigh...
~ViXeN~
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4 posted 02-02-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

this is really beautiful... excuse me while i wipe the tears from my eyes.... i can totally relate to this
well done =)
Denise
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5 posted 02-02-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful and romantic, I agree! Well done! A real pleasure to read!  

Denise
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6 posted 02-02-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

A.K., this is so beautiful and flows gently. I really like it! -SEA
Dolphins3
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7 posted 02-02-2000 05:38 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Sir Knight , Welcome to Passions. Beautiful work. I look forward to reading more.  
jascanvey
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8 posted 02-02-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Sir Knight may I be your damsel in distress?!! *sigh*
 
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