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I'll think of you forever

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Arabian Knight
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0 posted 02-01-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for Arabian Knight   Email Arabian Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Arabian Knight

You are a friend I love indeed
you're never far at time of need
you heal my wounds that always bleed
I'll think of you forever

Before we met my eyes were blind
you gave me sight..the perfect kind
your face is always in my mind
I'll think of you forever

You satisfied my urging soul
you gave my life a noble goal
your service is my only role
I'll think of you forever

Your smile has caused my sun to show
and through your laugh my winds will blow
your caring words make roses grow
I'll think of you forever

Without your eyes there is no life
your absence is a poisoned knife
to see you is my  highest strife
I'll think of you forever

For you I open all my doors
and fight for you a thousand wars
the heart inside my chest is yours
I'll think of you forever

Your memory revives my heart
your image is my only art
and even if we go apart
I'll think of you forever




[This message has been edited by Arabian Knight (edited 02-02-2000).]
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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 02-01-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Arabian Knight, you've written a beautiful piece here. The rhythm is flowing and unfeigned, the message, sincere. Very well done!

Claire
Marilyn
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since 09-26-1999
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2 posted 02-01-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Oh, oh *sigh*. This is a wonderful first piece. Welcome to Passions. Now if only this girl could find a Knight who would write like this for her...lol
Gene
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since 01-23-2000
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3 posted 02-01-2000 04:20 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

This is really excellent! The words roll off my tongue with such ease.

Welcome, Arabian--great entrance.

~Gene
Denise
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4 posted 02-01-2000 05:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, AK! This sure sounds like love to me! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
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with you


5 posted 02-01-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

AK, this is wonderful! Welcome!!   -SEA
Zelda
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6 posted 02-01-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

Forever and a day... your poem is sure to capture many hearts.
Beautiful...
Z
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 02-01-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

*sigh* what a first posting. Wonderful poem and welcome to passions  
tulip
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8 posted 02-02-2000 01:04 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Arabian Knight,
How lucky she is to have someone feel the way you do...Just a question, is she in your life now?  Alot of the verses are in past tense as well as the line "Your memory revives my heart".  She's very lucky.
This was beautifully written.  
Justbleu
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9 posted 02-02-2000 01:39 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This was a beautiful piece it definately touched my heart!!  A friend is one of most wonderful people in the world!! I loved this!!  A very nice piece for a first post!!  Welcome to Passions!!

Take Care
Bridgette


 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."
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