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Safwan Arekat
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Hello to all.. I must return to my classes and to my laboratory. My vacation amongst you here was truly MAGICAL.  I leave you with this incantation to summon the poetic spirits in the river of our thoughts, to crush all barriers.


Spirits of Deep
awake from sleep
up to the surface
jump and leap

Gather here
and gather now
and flow as Words
in rush and speed

Seep through walls,
and open gaps
and overflow
the beaverís heap


P      E      A     C      E


Safwan Arekat http://magicboat.com



[This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 02-01-2000).]
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Denise
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1 posted 02-01-2000 11:24 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, Safwan! Please return as soon as you can! You are a very talented writer!  
Denise
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Looking forward to your next visit, Safwan.  Peace.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


JamesMichael
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3 posted 02-01-2000 03:14 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"Spirits of the deep, awake from your sleep".
Very magical. I enjoyed the ride and Safwan before you go,

May your magic carpet ride
be trouble free
full of blessings
and flowing poetry.

Take care, James




[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 02-01-2000).]
Safwan Arekat
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Bahrain


4 posted 02-01-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Safwan Arekat   Email Safwan Arekat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Safwan Arekat's Home Page   View IP for Safwan Arekat

Denise and Sunshine : Thank you very much, I look forward to coming back soon.
James: Your suggestion will make it flow better . But I just edited it back to its original version. I should learn not to hesitate too much . I wish you all the best.
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 02-01-2000 09:50 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Safwan-

Whatever you do ...
hurry back.
In the meantime ...
I will visit your homepage
and float the 'magic boat'
of synchronicity.

Peace and magic be yours.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 02-01-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Safwan,
That was a very short visit you payed us and I hope you'll return and give us some more of your beautiful poetry.
Liz
 
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