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I won't go far away

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vandana
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0 posted 02-01-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


I won't go far away,
Even though ,
the world will call me a fool,
Knowing just being with you,
Life ain't without love,
If you asked me to go,
I'll go,
But won't go far away,
Because our love is true,
Will be true forever,
I won't go far away,
Iknow,
you want me to go,
But I'll do what is best for us,
you
and the world can think about the rest,
Let the world think I'm crazy,
If you think leaving me,
It's alright for you,
You don't know me well,
You can't tell me
how I feel for you,
But I still won't go far away,
I won't go that far
Because I love you so
I won't go far away from you,


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1 posted 02-01-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

WOW! I think this is my favorite of yours so far! This is wonderful, vandana!    
Denise
Mike
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2 posted 02-01-2000 12:37 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

As Denise said, definitely one of your better ones Vandana.  Good job... wooo hooo
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