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vandana
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0 posted 2000-02-01 10:52 AM



I won't go far away,
Even though ,
the world will call me a fool,
Knowing just being with you,
Life ain't without love,
If you asked me to go,
I'll go,
But won't go far away,
Because our love is true,
Will be true forever,
I won't go far away,
Iknow,
you want me to go,
But I'll do what is best for us,
you
and the world can think about the rest,
Let the world think I'm crazy,
If you think leaving me,
It's alright for you,
You don't know me well,
You can't tell me
how I feel for you,
But I still won't go far away,
I won't go that far
Because I love you so
I won't go far away from you,



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-01 11:14 AM


WOW! I think this is my favorite of yours so far! This is wonderful, vandana!    
Denise

Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-02-01 12:37 PM


As Denise said, definitely one of your better ones Vandana.  Good job... wooo hooo
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