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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Sanctuary When I give vow the wed of sleep, I search within this lair of reap, A place to share the elsewhere. A point perhaps where I do hide, A sanctuary of abide. A neighborhood of safe declare. A berth where I can soothe my ill. A place where I can air my will. An area, where I am bare. Through the corridors of maroon, A place to mend and lick my wounds. A tend where prey can utter prayer. From the acids that eat my goal. A place where I can treat my soul. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
We all need a haven like that, that's for sure! Well done, as always, Sy!  Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That brings back fond memories of cuddling in my father's lap - the safest feeling in the world. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, your right about that, thank you for the comment. *L* Sunshine, A very nice comment, thank you *L* |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Always making me think, Sy. Well done, as always. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Seymour, once again you've shared a mixture of darkness and light, comfort and contrast. Very nicely shared, I might add. I admire your language use. Thank you. This is wonderful. Claire |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Great piece Sy. Hmm I think I need a trip to my sanctuary, I am not sure if I should thankyou or curse you for that...lol. Now..*checking my schedual*...Where can I fit in the time?? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, My spirit finds a sanctuary in your verses Love ya, Liz |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hope you have your sanctuary Sey- Mine's me with my nose buried in a book!!! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well put Sir Tabin... "A place where I can treat my soul." Sanctuary?... found in the love of my wife and daughters, for there is no better place to be. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sally, Thank you Sally. Meadow, A very nice comment, thank you. Marilyn, Just make some room. Elizabeth, You are so clever, love Sy Chris, Enjoy the books they are good. Andrew, You have found it. |
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