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childomine
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0 posted 02-01-2000 07:43 AM       View Profile for childomine   Email childomine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for childomine

my thoughts of you are but a whisper
like a soft and gentle breeze
lightly caressing my heart and soul
with bitter-sweet memories

your walk, your eyes, the way you smile
are all etched within my mind
a portrait of love and happiness
to carry with me through time

when I feel the sand beneath my feet
the wind whispering in my ear
I often think of how it was
and wish that you were here

I'll always feel a sadness
because we had to part
but because of having known you
sweet memories fill my heart

I love you dear brother!

© Copyright 2000 Kim Soule - All Rights Reserved
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This is sadly beautiful and a touching tribute to Jeff. Very lovely, Childomine!
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Very wonderful words. . . your loss and the love that you felt are very apparent. . .

Beautiful. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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A bittersweet dedication, childomine. Thank you for sharing your heart's feelings.


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