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ryun
Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 33
elsinore, ca, usa

0 posted 2000-02-01 05:41 AM


I'm in a closed enviroment wich put's pressure on my open mind.
If you could only understand what these people hold in ther minds.
The dead stories wornout lies, said by many tried by nine.
expressing the feelings towrds the surroundings around me.
In reality is a bit of fatuality.
reality is that of what we make it,
and limits we hold if we, never thought that everything is it self
it would be one whole explainable thought filtered for all the crock.
I explain my mind and thought the way I'm thinkin.
I don't know why all I can say is look with your feelings
and not with your eyes..!!

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-02-01 11:30 AM


Well sometimes the eyes can be decieving!
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