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feelings (think)..

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ryun
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0 posted 02-01-2000 05:38 AM       View Profile for ryun   Email ryun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ryun's Home Page   View IP for ryun

Why am I trying to explain my feelings i'm feelin
Expressing nothing.
gone in my mind stuck way behind, trust
My gut it's hard to with pride
Stuck in my mind is wher I hide.

All my problems and situations I face
I think about it until it's to late
Then it seems dumb.
So I sit and twiddle my thumbs..

As I write I don't think
I do; it flows out my mind from me to you
Expressions like this I never knew
I just thought like this to you..
Think..
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WhtDove
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1 posted 02-01-2000 11:27 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Sometimes those thoughts we are thinking are hard to come out on paper.
Denise
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Yes, they are, I agree. Very hard sometimes!
You've expressed your feelings well in this, though!  

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