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tracie66
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0 posted 01-31-2000 07:37 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

You're everywhere

You're all of my world, everything that I can see

You fill my world with happiness and you've come and set me free

You're the moon that I see shining brightly upon your face

You're the stars that dance lightly as we softly embrace

You're the gentle night air breeze, gently brushing upon my knee's

You're the sweet smells in the air, flowing through my hair

And you're all around me and I thankyou for being there



[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 02-01-2000).]
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jfreak
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1 posted 01-31-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Whomever this is, is truly the center of your universe.  This is just so sweet.  Very well done.  Keep up the good work.

Jfreak
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2 posted 01-31-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sweet and lovely, I agree!

Denise
mariee66
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3 posted 02-01-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Simply dreamy~

Very nice!

Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard
Christopher
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4 posted 02-01-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Like the sentiments, but could I suggest a minor grammatical change... "Your" should be "You're" As in YOU ARE...
tracie66
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5 posted 02-01-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Many thanks to jfreak, Denise mariee and a special thanks to Christopher for spotting my error Ta....    Chris I'll edit it straight away..
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6 posted 02-01-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Tracie, this was very, very sweet!   -SEA
tracie66
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7 posted 02-02-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sea..thanks for your sweet reply and thanks for reading...Tracie    
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8 posted 02-03-2000 09:48 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Sounds like love to me Tracie  
tracie66
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9 posted 02-03-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear Hoot
Yes my loving husband who saved me from my past torture and has held my hand all the way since....14 years in fact. Thanks for reading  
 
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