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Brian My Dream

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Alina Le Ann
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INDIANA


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BRIAN MY DREAM

You came into my life so fast
And gave me love I hoped would last
Days went by and time stood still
You took my heart and made a deal

To me you promised to be true
To cherrish my love for only you
In your arms you'd hold me tight
Thinking of me day and night

You'd smile at me to make my day
To win your heart I'd sit and pray
With a ring and on one knee
You sweetly whispered "marry me"

To this I did not hesitate
I married you my one soul mate
This dream with you I hope comes true
Brian baby, I love you!


Dedicated to Brian....the love of my life....
I will always love you baby!



 
© Copyright 2000 Alina Le Ann - All Rights Reserved
Gene
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1 posted 01-31-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Alina Le Ann,

Brian's a lucky guy.

Beautiful first post.  

Welcome to the forums,
~Gene
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2 posted 01-31-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Alina-
Very sweet.
Hope it gets even better.

Welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


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dovesongs
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I hope your love lasts forever.  Nice poem.

 
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4 posted 01-31-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Alina! This is a very beautiful love poem. I hope all your dreams come true! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
Munda
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5 posted 01-31-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Lovely poem ! I love it  
Alina Le Ann
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Thank you all so much for your comments!
This being my first tim eto post a poem I was actually kind of scared of the replies I would get....I never expected things like these...and how you all replied so quickly....it ruly means a lot...
thank you again

Alina Le Ann
Paul Hoekman
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7 posted 01-31-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

WELCOME TO
THE FORUM
Wonderful first post!
did someone say baby?
Parker
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Alina Le Ann, Welcome to Passions.
I'm with Paul Baby Baby!
JamesMichael
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A beautiful poem and a blessed couple.  Life is good.  James
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