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Alina Le Ann
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since 2000-01-30
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INDIANA

0 posted 2000-01-31 06:11 PM


BRIAN MY DREAM

You came into my life so fast
And gave me love I hoped would last
Days went by and time stood still
You took my heart and made a deal

To me you promised to be true
To cherrish my love for only you
In your arms you'd hold me tight
Thinking of me day and night

You'd smile at me to make my day
To win your heart I'd sit and pray
With a ring and on one knee
You sweetly whispered "marry me"

To this I did not hesitate
I married you my one soul mate
This dream with you I hope comes true
Brian baby, I love you!


Dedicated to Brian....the love of my life....
I will always love you baby!



 

© Copyright 2000 Alina Le Ann - All Rights Reserved
Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
1 posted 2000-01-31 06:34 PM


Alina Le Ann,

Brian's a lucky guy.

Beautiful first post.  

Welcome to the forums,
~Gene

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-01-31 06:52 PM


Alina-
Very sweet.
Hope it gets even better.

Welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


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dovesongs
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 102
Michigan
3 posted 2000-01-31 06:55 PM


I hope your love lasts forever.  Nice poem.

 

Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-31 06:57 PM


Welcome to Passions, Alina! This is a very beautiful love poem. I hope all your dreams come true! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-01-31 07:32 PM


Lovely poem ! I love it  
Alina Le Ann
Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40
INDIANA
6 posted 2000-01-31 10:37 PM


Thank you all so much for your comments!
This being my first tim eto post a poem I was actually kind of scared of the replies I would get....I never expected things like these...and how you all replied so quickly....it ruly means a lot...
thank you again

Alina Le Ann

Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
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7 posted 2000-01-31 10:44 PM


WELCOME TO
THE FORUM
Wonderful first post!
did someone say baby?

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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ON
8 posted 2000-02-01 11:06 AM


Alina Le Ann, Welcome to Passions.
I'm with Paul Baby Baby!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2000-02-01 03:25 PM


A beautiful poem and a blessed couple.  Life is good.  James
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