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A reply to Spyro's "The Explanation"

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White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wastelan


0 posted 01-31-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for White Wolf

I just thought I would explain this time
And give it in a little rhyme
Some say it is the story of my life
So I will now tell you about my plight

So it happened that fateful day
With the wind blowing causing trees to sway
I was out walking alone
When some human cast his stone

He was aiming for my head
But hit my foot instead
I paid him a glance
I wondered who could have such ignorance

Only a human could be so dense
As I watched him climb a fence
I paid him no heed
For a fight I did not need

So I continued my little stroll
Until I encountered this little troll
He told me of a love so hot
And that I may have a shot

I left him standing there
As I jumped up and took to the air
Higher and highr I did soar
Until the troll I could see no more

I flew to the place of her rest
I waited to see if he was correct
Then I saw her land with all her grace
All of my doubts, not a trace

She was covered with gold and silver scales
From her head to her tail
She looked at me with those eyes
I knew this was no disguise

Her beauty I did behold
Wishing her for me to hold
As she walked my way
Did my knees begin to sway

Then she whispered in my ear
All of the things I wanted to hear
I wanted to stay there for all time
Even if it was a crime

She loved me like no other
And pulled me out from under my cover
Things were going great
I even lost track of the date

This were my memory starts to go black
Somehow I managed to lose track
I remember falling
And hearing her calling

I could feel her fire
I knew would never tire
Her love was so hot
It burned me on the spot

My wings are strong
I wondered what I had did wrong
Fallling I could not stop
Until I completed this drop

That is were I was found
Laying on the ground

A plausable explaination to how you found me and how I remember it.  This story is true for me.  It happened to me.  Her love is so hot it has burned(scorched) this Dragon.

P.S.  Hope you like this Little_Spyro.



 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

© Copyright 2000 Justin D. Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Gene
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1 posted 01-31-2000 06:45 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Well now there's just no shutt'n you up, is there? *joking*  

It looks like your writer's block has been unplugged. This poem is terrific! Keep it up.

Gene
Denise
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2 posted 01-31-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very entertaining! Very good! I'm sure Sam will love it!

Denise
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3 posted 01-31-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I love it how these two stories come together ! Great poem  
White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wastelan


4 posted 01-31-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

That you all so much.  My writer's block has left and some of the reason why is all you great people in here.  Yes I know it is long but felt like giving a proper tribute to Sam.  

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 01-31-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

What a nice tribute to her  
Little_Spyro
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6 posted 02-01-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for Little_Spyro   Email Little_Spyro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Little_Spyro

You bet I like this! This is GREAT!  
Good story, too...I wonder, did it happen in real life? (Of course, there would be no trolls around--I think, unless you count people like I.R.S. employees, etc.)

In short, yes, I like it!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon


White Wolf
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7 posted 02-01-2000 05:12 AM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

Yes Spyro this did happen to me.  As to the troll, I had to think of something to stir the imagination.  The troll is the inner feelings I had and followed them.  Thank you everyone again.  Feels like home.

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

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