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simplyYRREHS
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0 posted 01-31-2000 04:34 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for simplyYRREHS

These
P A L P I T A T I O N S

erupt from a heart once numb.
The feeling of love before me has come.
Impossible would I have thought before
that love could come from nothing more

than
C O N V E R S A T I O N S

resulting from online time shared.
My innermost self to you I have bared.
Remarkable this friendship that we have before us ~
a bond unconditional and gently amorous.

The
I N S P I R A T I O N S

received from your tender, typed thought
are truly amazing and inside my wrought
angers and fears are replaced by something new ~
this love that exists between me and you.
© Copyright 2000 Sherry - All Rights Reserved
fc
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1 posted 01-31-2000 04:49 PM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fc

very nice sherry, very beautiful, and yep, it happens  
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 01-31-2000 04:51 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Very creative and sincere!
DH
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3 posted 01-31-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Beautiful thoughts, Sherry. Just read those words with both eyes open, ok? Geez, I'm sounding like a father!!
simplyYRREHS
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4 posted 01-31-2000 05:13 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

danny and fc....THANKS!  I had a lot of fun writing this one.

Balladeer...or should it be "Daddy Deer"? EYES ARE WIDE OPEN, both of them.  Know what you mean, and appreciate it...but know that "love" takes on many forms, and this not necessarily means I'm eloping tomorrow.    Simply in referrence to friendships online, and how they become very much a part of our "real" lives.  
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5 posted 01-31-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Sherry!  

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6 posted 01-31-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sherry-
I like the creative thinking in this.

You sound like a pretty
smart cookie to me.

I'm sure your eyes are wide-open !  
~*Marge*~


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Your presentation of these fine words is wonderful  
JamesMichael
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8 posted 02-02-2000 02:09 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Sherry this is a beautifully inspired poem. Enjoy your new found friendship cause friends are very valuable.   James
 
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