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mariee66
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With his eyes filled with glow,
Near the fire so low...
Throughout the evening,
Just clinging, loving-
Like no other person was alive.

By and by the fire grew dimmer,
Off to the shore,
The tide beat against the rocks...
Across the sky, there were streaks-
Like the colors of love.

Among everything, there I was alone...
Against the cool, gentle breeze and my loved one.

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1 posted 01-31-2000 04:21 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Marie, You paint a beautiful picture with so few words! Very nice.   -SEA
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2 posted 01-31-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Mariee I agree with sea you have painted a beautiful picture...Very nice   Tracie
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3 posted 01-31-2000 08:52 PM       View Profile for Me2   Email Me2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Me2

I pictured places where I too have felt the same. I felt the cold as well as the warmth almost immediately.  
Thanks for taking me back to a place long a go.    
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4 posted 01-31-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely and romantic! Very nice, Marie!

Denise
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5 posted 01-31-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A beautiful moment now made permanent with this lovely poem
Liz
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6 posted 01-31-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

What a picture painted with your words.  Thank you for the look into your world  

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL


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7 posted 02-01-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

I want to say thank you all for reading and enjoying my poem~

Feel the love~

Marie~
 
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