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LngJhnAg
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0 posted 2000-01-31 02:47 PM


I searched high and low for a poem befitting Evil One's style, and this is all I could come up with - a rewritten repost of mine from #1

The last time she fought Evil One,
He had her down on her knees.
He refused to give in to her
And to her insistent pleas.

So she crawled ever closer,
But Evil pulled back instead.
He refused to satisfy her
By listening to what she said.

She lifted up her hands,
She begged him to come near.
Her requests that he yield an inch,
Fell only on deafened ears.

He firmly retained his position,
He refused her every demand,
To crawl out from under his bed,
And fight her like a man.

© Copyright 2000 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-01-31 02:54 PM


Ummm... errr... sailor??? There are some things about your love life we'd really rather not know! LOL. (Get 'im, Lor! *G*)
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2 posted 2000-01-31 03:58 PM


Well, I can certainly understand. To request that you yield your inch is bound to fall on deaf ears!!!  
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3 posted 2000-01-31 04:00 PM


fitting, I think.

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
4 posted 2000-01-31 04:16 PM


Hey!  What happened to the IP addresses?
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5 posted 2000-01-31 04:26 PM


LOL! Can't get anything by a sailor for sure. They were taken off.......4 days ago! (I think it's a security thing)
LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
6 posted 2000-01-31 04:28 PM


Taken off?  Four days ago?  Does this mean what I think it means???  I can now be Mr. Cucumber and nobody will know its me????  I can be Kitty-Kicker, too?  And my identity is safe???  yippeee!!!!!

what's that???  People will somehow know????  How can this be????  *quizzical, confused eyes*

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7 posted 2000-01-31 04:49 PM


LJA: I'll know you, the flavour will give you away..*g*

HUSG

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