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An Ode to the Evil One (repost from #1)

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LngJhnAg
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I searched high and low for a poem befitting Evil One's style, and this is all I could come up with - a rewritten repost of mine from #1

The last time she fought Evil One,
He had her down on her knees.
He refused to give in to her
And to her insistent pleas.

So she crawled ever closer,
But Evil pulled back instead.
He refused to satisfy her
By listening to what she said.

She lifted up her hands,
She begged him to come near.
Her requests that he yield an inch,
Fell only on deafened ears.

He firmly retained his position,
He refused her every demand,
To crawl out from under his bed,
And fight her like a man.
© Copyright 2000 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-31-2000 02:54 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Ummm... errr... sailor??? There are some things about your love life we'd really rather not know! LOL. (Get 'im, Lor! *G*)
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2 posted 01-31-2000 03:58 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, I can certainly understand. To request that you yield your inch is bound to fall on deaf ears!!!  
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3 posted 01-31-2000 04:00 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

fitting, I think.

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

LngJhnAg
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4 posted 01-31-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hey!  What happened to the IP addresses?
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5 posted 01-31-2000 04:26 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

LOL! Can't get anything by a sailor for sure. They were taken off.......4 days ago! (I think it's a security thing)
LngJhnAg
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Taken off?  Four days ago?  Does this mean what I think it means???  I can now be Mr. Cucumber and nobody will know its me????  I can be Kitty-Kicker, too?  And my identity is safe???  yippeee!!!!!

what's that???  People will somehow know????  How can this be????  *quizzical, confused eyes*
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LJA: I'll know you, the flavour will give you away..*g*

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