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Two as One

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Marilyn
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0 posted 01-31-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marilyn

In the twilight, loves last blooming
Sat she there as if of stone
In her mind the thoughts were creeping
To the past where love once lived

Through the years, two lives had mingled
Sharing joy and love and tears
Now she sits, looks ever backwards
Yearning for the love that's gone

Though her hair now all is silver
And her hands do ceasless shake
In her eyes there lives the youthful
Memories and feelings still

Few regrets she has to offer
Of the life she lived with glee
Children born and raised with laughter
Beside her Great and Grand now stand

In the twilight, loves last blooming
Place she there upon the stone
All her love and life's true treasure
Symbolized within the rose

Lay she there amoung the sleeping
Reaching past her life's last breath
To the one who is now waiting
Waiting for his heart once more

There they run with wild abandon
Young once more in heaven's realm
Joined in love that is enduring
Two as one are One again




[This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 01-31-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 01-31-2000 01:36 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Marilyn:  Exquisite...

HUGS

 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...
Mike
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2 posted 01-31-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Has a musical quality to it... enjoyed.
Gene
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3 posted 01-31-2000 01:46 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Marylin,

This is gorgeous!

There's an old Zen saying, "One plus one is two, but sometimes it's just one."

~Gene

[This message has been edited by u_gene (edited 01-31-2000).]
mariee66
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4 posted 01-31-2000 01:57 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Remarkably beautiful, Marilyn~

Love knows no boundaries~

Marie~
Denise
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5 posted 01-31-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Marilyn! Enduring, undending love! The best kind to have!

Denise
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6 posted 01-31-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent writing, Marilyn....and the flow is wonderful.
Danny Holloway
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7 posted 01-31-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

"In the twilight, loves last blooming".
Wonderful line! That which follows is equally good.

DH
Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 01-31-2000 05:26 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Marilyn, I love your poetry, this is musical and beautiful.Liz
JamesMichael
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9 posted 01-31-2000 05:27 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Oh Marilyn this is wonderful that you have these beautiful memories in your past to look back on and enjoy.   I have been thinking about these things a bit lately and I though about how sad it must be for a woman that was married to an abuser or womanizer to look back on her life with sorrow...missed opportunites.  After losing a spouse thru diviorce or death can we look back with loving memories or discust.
It is so precious that you have loving memories in your past. A very touching poem. James
Munda
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10 posted 01-31-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Marilyn !   This is so beautiful ! If you don't mind I'll print this one.  
Marilyn
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11 posted 01-31-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Rainbow, Mike,u_gene and mariee...Thankyou all. I am very glad you enjoyed this.

Denise...Yes enduring love..*sigh* now all I have to do is find it...lol.

Mike....*bowing to the master*. You taught me everything I know.  

Danny...Thankyou so very much!

Liz....I love yours as well. Sorry I don't reply as much as I would like to.

James...I am very glad you liked it. This has nothing to do with my life though. GOSH! My kids are under 10..

Munda. By all means my friend, it is my pleasure. I very glad you enjoyed it so much!
First__Knight
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12 posted 01-31-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Oh Lady Marilyn,

You nack for writing is wonderful.  Beyond all you have the talent for this    This is great

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL


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13 posted 01-31-2000 10:09 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Marilyn-
Some beautiful thoughts here.
This rolls gently.
I like it very much.
Reminds me of a lesson in
the arthmetic of love.
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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14 posted 02-01-2000 08:52 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Marilyn, this is absolutely beautiful, perhaps one of your best yet  
Nan
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15 posted 02-02-2000 06:48 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I like this one, Marilyn - I like it a lot...
 
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