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Two as One |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
In the twilight, loves last blooming Sat she there as if of stone In her mind the thoughts were creeping To the past where love once lived Through the years, two lives had mingled Sharing joy and love and tears Now she sits, looks ever backwards Yearning for the love that's gone Though her hair now all is silver And her hands do ceasless shake In her eyes there lives the youthful Memories and feelings still Few regrets she has to offer Of the life she lived with glee Children born and raised with laughter Beside her Great and Grand now stand In the twilight, loves last blooming Place she there upon the stone All her love and life's true treasure Symbolized within the rose Lay she there amoung the sleeping Reaching past her life's last breath To the one who is now waiting Waiting for his heart once more There they run with wild abandon Young once more in heaven's realm Joined in love that is enduring Two as one are One again [This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 01-31-2000).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Marilyn: Exquisite...  HUGS Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Has a musical quality to it... enjoyed. |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Marylin, This is gorgeous! There's an old Zen saying, "One plus one is two, but sometimes it's just one." ~Gene [This message has been edited by u_gene (edited 01-31-2000).] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Remarkably beautiful, Marilyn~ Love knows no boundaries~ Marie~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Marilyn! Enduring, undending love! The best kind to have! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent writing, Marilyn....and the flow is wonderful. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"In the twilight, loves last blooming". Wonderful line! That which follows is equally good. DH |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marilyn, I love your poetry, this is musical and beautiful.Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh Marilyn this is wonderful that you have these beautiful memories in your past to look back on and enjoy. I have been thinking about these things a bit lately and I though about how sad it must be for a woman that was married to an abuser or womanizer to look back on her life with sorrow...missed opportunites. After losing a spouse thru diviorce or death can we look back with loving memories or discust. It is so precious that you have loving memories in your past. A very touching poem. James |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Marilyn !  This is so beautiful ! If you don't mind I'll print this one. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Rainbow, Mike,u_gene and mariee...Thankyou all. I am very glad you enjoyed this. Denise...Yes enduring love..*sigh* now all I have to do is find it...lol. Mike....*bowing to the master*. You taught me everything I know.  Danny...Thankyou so very much! Liz....I love yours as well. Sorry I don't reply as much as I would like to. James...I am very glad you liked it. This has nothing to do with my life though. GOSH! My kids are under 10.. Munda. By all means my friend, it is my pleasure. I very glad you enjoyed it so much! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh Lady Marilyn, You nack for writing is wonderful. Beyond all you have the talent for this This is greatI used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marilyn- Some beautiful thoughts here. This rolls gently. I like it very much. Reminds me of a lesson in the arthmetic of love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marilyn, this is absolutely beautiful, perhaps one of your best yet |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like this one, Marilyn - I like it a lot...  |
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