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0 posted 01-31-2000 12:41 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

she says
i have a heart of gold
but it only helps to weigh me down
she rivets and halts the world at will
just to prove thats shes still around
and she needs to end my imperfections
just to prove that she can
doesnt she sound more like a man..
she wonders why i bother to care
she will stop the wind in its very wake
just to relish the sound
of everyone's meager heart break..
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1 posted 01-31-2000 12:47 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

She doesn't sound too nice....... I hope you aren't too serious about her.......Anyway, Great writting! -SEA
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