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Secret Heart, Open Heart

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Me2
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0 posted 01-31-2000 12:39 PM       View Profile for Me2   Email Me2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Me2


Too much sorrow,
Too much pain,
Too much perfection
With nothing to gain.

Just as trusting,
Just as nice,
Just as magic
With you in my life.

Never enough love,
Never enough voice,
Never enough dreams
With you as my choice.

Always in beauty,
Always in song,
Always in love
With you I belong.

Let me twice live,
Let me once die,
Let me 'ever love,
With you I can fly.

© Copyright 2000 Paul Willis - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you


1 posted 01-31-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Me2, oh so romantic! Love it......... Wonderfull.......I could go on and on...... -SEA
mariee66
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2 posted 01-31-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Where's the candle light, where's the wine?!!

That is a perfect poem expressing love~

Well written~

Marie~
Gene
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3 posted 01-31-2000 01:20 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Me2,

Very melodic, and nice sentiments.  

~Gene
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 01-31-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Let love take flight!
Nice poem Me2
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devina
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5 posted 01-31-2000 03:13 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is most beautiful...and romantic I might add...you lil heartbreaker Paul!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
fc
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6 posted 01-31-2000 05:02 PM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fc

sigh, no wonder, me2, you could have written this for me as well, really liked this

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simplyYRREHS
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7 posted 01-31-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Really like the 'style' in which this one is written!  Simple, but not.  And such a happy subject, to boot.  

 "The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau

Beri
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8 posted 02-01-2000 03:35 AM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

What a beautiful love poem Me2!  I love the style in this one also!  Style usually doesn't strike me so much, but this time you did the trick!  I love this and look forward to reading more!  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 02-01-2000 06:51 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Paul-
Captivating and refreshing look
at love.
I like.
~*Marge*~


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Denise
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10 posted 02-01-2000 11:34 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very lovely, Paul! Very lovely indeed!    

Denise
 
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