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Our First Kiss

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Parker
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... the old black rum


0 posted 01-31-2000 11:08 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Our First Kiss
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as the cinders grow and the fire dies
the passion grips from deep inside
we hesitate as our lips draw near
a nervous smile sends away our fears

with ackward grace the moments pass
in grappling arms our kisses clash
a moments clumsiness is soon to pass
our first kiss, but not the last.

James Parker Haley
© Copyright 2000 James Parker Haley - All Rights Reserved
mariee66
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1 posted 01-31-2000 11:12 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

"Yeah, baby! Yeah!"

I remember my first kiss!

Nicely done!!

Marie~
dovesongs
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2 posted 01-31-2000 01:14 PM       View Profile for dovesongs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dovesongs

I'm feeling the scorch of that first kiss!
Do you see my toes curling?    

 
Gene
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3 posted 01-31-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Oooo! a big wet smooch from Marie.

I wish my poems would get a respone like that.  

~Gene
devina
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4 posted 01-31-2000 03:11 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Now you've got me thinking James...are you THAT good, or do you just write That good!!?? I'm sure the one on the other side of your passionate kiss is most fortunante!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Parker
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... the old black rum


5 posted 01-31-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Thanks Marie, every first kiss is just as good.

dovesongs, yes I do see those toes curling.

u_gene, I think I was just lucky with this one.

devina, ...... THAT GOOD.   .... but I need somebody new on the other side.

Parker

tracie66
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6 posted 01-31-2000 07:47 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

James what a lovely poem, enjoyed the read Tracie    
Meadowmuse
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7 posted 01-31-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

The first kiss...how deliciously you've shared it with this reader.

Claire
devina
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8 posted 01-31-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

(Devina running up with lips puckered!!!) LOL! I couldn't resist writing that dear James...forgive me???

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 01-31-2000 09:21 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

James
But wasn't it woth it? Yes!
Enjoyed
Liz
Alina Le Ann
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INDIANA


10 posted 01-31-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for Alina Le Ann   Email Alina Le Ann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alina Le Ann's Home Page   View IP for Alina Le Ann

I hear the sound of sweet love (and wet kisses  ) in the air!!

I really enjoyed the poem...great job!!
One Who Understands
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11 posted 02-01-2000 12:09 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Just like it was yesterday, with the decription of this poem.

Beautiful
Beri
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12 posted 02-01-2000 04:12 AM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

How clearly you have brought back memories of my first kiss!  Sweet...
But boy aren't yuo so sure of yourself?  Haha -- just kidding!  So you really are that good huh?     Devina could be lucky if she would go running -- heehee.

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

JamesMichael
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13 posted 02-01-2000 05:21 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"Our first kiss, but not the last".  I think you sumed it up very nicely.    James
Parker
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... the old black rum


14 posted 02-01-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Thanks Tracie, Meadowmuse.

devina, pucker away, I'm going to have to keep that image.  

Liz, yes always worth it my dear.

Alina Le Ann, sweet love I wish, but deliciously Wet kisses now that is more possible... also waiting with lips puckered.

One Who Understands, yes you do understand.

Beri, I don't really think I'm that good, but I must admit long passionate kissing, I live for it. Talking's nice, but no kissing, no jimmy boy. (the other subject i'll leave to the adult forum).

jmlee12345, thanks.

Parker


Martini
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15 posted 07-25-2000 02:27 PM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martini

ahhh
the memories of my first kiss....
well lets not go there!!

great description of the first kiss!!1

I really enjoyed this one...

if you like kisses as much as you say you should check out my poem  "this kiss"

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost
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with you


16 posted 05-31-2001 06:13 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

LOVE THIS

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 05-31-2001).]

Parker
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... the old black rum


17 posted 05-31-2001 08:28 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Sea, thank you.  
maeve
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18 posted 08-10-2001 08:10 AM       View Profile for maeve   Email maeve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maeve

Parker,
It's amazing what you find on a fishing trip.  

Me
Temptress
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19 posted 07-07-2002 03:35 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Missing this poet and his poetry.
I could send this to someone who would identify with it as much as I do right now.
**sigh**
lovely

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Dee
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20 posted 07-11-2002 12:34 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Hey, where did he go? I miss all the gossip while I am gone.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

dgvarner
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21 posted 09-23-2002 01:34 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

hmm..i guess this is not a new post...lol  but it seems to be up and about and i dont recall ever having read it!  

so..just a little tidbit for devina...yes, that good....     

enjoyed this one............

lv,g


"dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!"  -unknown

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (09-23-2002 01:36 AM).]

Fuji
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22 posted 09-23-2002 04:27 AM       View Profile for Fuji   Email Fuji   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fuji

Wow! Great poem.
Parker
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... the old black rum


23 posted 09-23-2002 09:35 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Temptress.... thanks.. the muse is so elusive at time.

Dee, gossip.... what gossip?

dg, you always find where I'm hiding.

.... and it was all you.. lol

Fuji, thanks for the read and Welcome to Passions.

Parker
CocoBaci
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24 posted 02-23-2003 10:36 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

A very sweet read indeed PoetFriendParker...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*
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