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vandana
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0 posted 01-31-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Whisper of the raindrops
Against my window,
Sitting on a couch,
Guitar on my lap,
Paper's lyning on the floor,
Such confusion,

Here,Living without you,
Today was the day for me
To sing the blues
Don't have any clue,
About you coming back,

So I decide
To play a guitar
And write a song
Till you're gone away,
So I sit
As the rain comes down,

Looking back those years
A single teardrop on my cheecks,
I just can't bear,
Not to have you beside with me,
Holding hands,

Life still goes on,
Guitars and songs
Is all I've to spent with,
Now Iam playing my guitar,
With your song you wrote It for me,

So,guitars and more songs,
I've to write
without love,
Whisper of the raindrops
And my teardrop,
Singing my heart away,
singing my songs
I've written before in my life



[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 01-31-2000).]
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Toerag
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1 posted 01-31-2000 11:28 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Sometimes when the mornin's startin,
I get out my old Martin,
And pick away to start the day,
Sometimes it takes the blues away.
Mike
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2 posted 01-31-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice Vandana.
I must admit, I would not visualize you playing a guitar and singing the blues...
*smile*
dovesongs
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3 posted 01-31-2000 01:08 PM       View Profile for dovesongs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dovesongs

Nice.  Nothing like music to soothe ones heart.  

 
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 01-31-2000 01:10 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I love the vision of playing a guitar on a rainy day. I did a lot of thet in my youth. It's so easy to get lost in the beautiful sound of a guitar, it makes the hours pass.
A very lovely poem, vanana
Liz
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5 posted 02-04-2000 10:49 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is sweetly sorrowful, Vandana. I like it very much!

Denise
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