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Crying

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First__Knight
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0 posted 01-31-2000 06:33 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight


Crying
~FIrst Knight~


Yes I'm crying,
As my heart bleeds out for you,
I want you now do you want me to?
Do you want me here at all?

And I'm trying,
To align your world with me,
Oh, darling this I hope you see,
I know you hear my heart call.

You know I' m not real sure where this began.
Bleeding heart while I stumble while I try to stand.
I don't cry easy , I have my pride,
But its in your arms that I confide

I'm crying.
Baby, I don't have a clue.
Anytime you see me turning blue.
Your my air, and I am found

And I'm dying.
Said I would just make it through.
and, as my mind swings back to you.
I see me hitting the ground.

Everyday of my life, yes I have found.
That I can see you there, and I can hear your sound.
If I could avoid the calling don't you know I would.
But I' d never be any good.

You think it would be easy to rely on love.
To know what is right with no help from above.
I' ve never felt a calling like I have with this.
And it's your sweet love that I do miss.

Now its out of control.

I'm crying
Baby, I don't stand a chance.
And I am afraid my heart won't dance.
So please help me let it go.

And I' m crying.
Crying like a fool for you
And you know my love is here and true.
I just wanted you to know,
That I' m crying.



 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL






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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 01-31-2000 06:50 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

David-
You touch me with your saddness.
My prayer is for your comfort.
Time ... sometimes it takes a little time.
~*Marge*~



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childomine
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2 posted 01-31-2000 07:36 AM       View Profile for childomine   Email childomine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for childomine

Your words make me feel the pain of the saddness.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 01-31-2000 09:00 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

David,
I am sitting here reading this and crying like a baby. I have unintentionally hurt you and knowing I have has hurt me. I understand that you did what you did to protect me and although it may not have been the wisest choice, I know why you did it now. Forgive my doubts, forgive my mistrust and most of all forgive me for hurting you. Please don't cry, your tears cause my heart to bleed and make me feel helpless when I can not be there to dry them. Everything will work out somehow, I truly believe that. I can't believe God would let one find their soulmate without letting them be together.
I love you,
Ruth
Marilyn
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4 posted 01-31-2000 09:59 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

David....I am so sorry for your pain and for Ruth's. I am friends with you both and I wish nothing but happiness for both of you. I hate to see my friends hurting and if there is anything I can do for either of you, I am here.

Is it 2004 yet?..lol.
dovesongs
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5 posted 01-31-2000 10:39 AM       View Profile for dovesongs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dovesongs

I have no words to describe the feelings this has provoked as tears roll down my face.  You are in my prayers.  Hope all is well with you now.

 
WhtDove
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6 posted 01-31-2000 10:59 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Alright, where'd those tissues go?  sniff, sniff...
mariee66
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7 posted 01-31-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

This was so sad~

Everything happens for a reason~

May things work out for you~

Marie~
First__Knight
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8 posted 01-31-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you all so much for your response to this.  I have been told only days ago that I was the father of a seven year old girl that I never knew about.  I have wanted to be a father for so long and now that I am I have missed seven years.  I am tore inside out and upside down.  I drove over 800 miles at a moments notice and hurt someone I love dearly and I am sorry and she knows who she is.  Thank you again.  And.....I love you too Ruth

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL


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