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Where Does Time Go?
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Where Does Time Go? |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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Where Does Time Go? Where does time go... The time that seems so endless, The days that seem so long. Does time fly like a feather... Slowly fading, gently stopping, Or does it wash away... As does a tear from our cheeks. Where does time go... Does time bring death, Or bring promises of life. And if death... Will time go on without the love of another soul. Is time immortal... And if so, why can't man be immortal... Afterall, it is man who makes use of time, Not the air or the sky. Where does time go... And where will time go when life has ceased... Will time fade, as does man, Or will it join us in death. Is time really a mystery... Will time ever cease... Where does time go? |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Contemplative and thought provoking and well written. I hesitate to a reply in rhyme to you here so I'll have it posted under title "When". Safwan |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Wow Marie This is going to have us all thinking in overdrive for the next month or so. I havn't even figured out where my socks go! Well done! Rex |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thank You!~ I appreciate all comments~ Marie~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
An excellent poem! I enjoyed it immensely. And welcome to Passions! Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-31-2000).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I don't think time ever ceases...only stands still in that one precious moment when two people fall in love...Wonderful poem!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marie~ I like to think that time takes wing and returns again and again. I've heard it said that time flies so perhaps it's on .... The wing of sparrow, the flutter of butterfly, Time goes round ... Man wastes it. We all want more of it. Yet when we have it ... we hurry past it. As you can see ... you've created a thought-provoking piece. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
Pondering your poem. My mind is whirling on this one. Great work, and I do mean great. It makes one think. Magnificent. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I'm glad you all found this thought provoking, and you liked it!! Thank you so much~ Marie~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Marie! Lovely poem! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thank you, Denise~ |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
like this, a lot, very nice poem  welcome |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Nice entrance. Welcome, Marie. ~Gene |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marie, liked the poem, gave me too much to think about this morning,  ,but liked it the same! Welcome! -SEA |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
fc- u_gene- SEA: Thank you for reading my poem, and for your warm welcome! Marge: I've had time to reflect on what youy wrote... Very lovely, and it holds truth. Thanks much! Marie~ |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
I sense sadness and maybe even defeat in this poem... oh, and you're making me THINK! Nicely done, Marie. Z |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Ah ha~ My trusty house mate has been here~ Thanks Z~ (Oh, and I accidentally posted a reply using your name, Z. Sorry!) Marie~ |
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