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I'm Scared
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
I'm Scared I don't want to love you - even though I already do I don't want to hug you and hold you close I don't want you to know how much you mean to me I'm scared I don't want to loose you - even though I don't really have you I can't picture me without you, and that scares me Every time I close my eyes, I see you Every time I go to sleep, I dream of you I love you, but... I'm scared I'm afraid if you see my love, you'll have more control I don't want to be hurt anymore Please leave me, because I can't Please just walk away and don't look back It's for the best, just go Just leave. |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Though we all must have been burned, and we are frightened from the unknown, we should never send our love away (if our love is a reciprocating human). Because It'll hurt even more if we never try! Well expressed emotion. Safwan |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
They say it's better to have loved, but sometimes I ask myself if it is. But it sure can be scary Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CC- Love is filled with confusion. You seem torn between two emotions. That's how love is. The best when it's the best. The pits when it's not. But always ... it is better to know love and to have been enriched by it. It will come again after you think it's gone. Wishing you days filled with it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
We've all been in the place you write about. Although it's scarey and at times doesn't work out - oh but the barrenness of having never know love at all! |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
Are you afraid of love or losing control? It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all. I hope you find what you are looking for. Nicely written. Can see your pain. |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
P.S. Hugz for you |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
HUGS Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... |
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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
Been there, are there, done that before. Nice job! I know EXACTLY what you're saying! Let me get in line to give you a hug. |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Thank you all so much!!!!! It means a lot  |
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