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Angel of Despair

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devina
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0 posted 01-31-2000 12:13 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina


An angel sits alone,
staring into the clouds

She swears she'll never
spread her wings again-
to reveal the warmth
of her soul therein.

Her tears sprinkle down bitterly
on the people below,
She casts her shadows of sadness-
on their unsuspecting laughter.
~Let her desparity be shown~

Never again
will she feel the happiness
that she felt
once before...

Let the whole world drown in her lonliness...
Of a heart that has been torn.


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...




[This message has been edited by devina (edited 01-31-2000).]
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SEA
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1 posted 01-31-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Devina, I've never given much thought to angels being sad, I will now. Great writting! -SEA
The Haunted Poet
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2 posted 01-31-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for The Haunted Poet   Email The Haunted Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Haunted Poet

I really liked this poem! The whole angel idea for the poem was very idealistic! Keep it up!
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3 posted 01-31-2000 12:25 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina-
Sad to think of little angel tears.
I like the images you conjured.
~Marge*~


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Parker
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devina, its very sad to see this angel so sad. Sometime when this little angel has cried her last tear, she will remember that she can fly. So fly away on these Winter nights, and the moon will be your calming light.

....Oh darkness, darkness of winters night
afraid you are of the Angels light.
Run away you evil gloom,
for its the time of the winter moon.

Parker.
mariee66
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5 posted 01-31-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

How dark this poem is~

Very nicely written though~

Marie~
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devina,

"What" can possibly bring a smile back to an angel ?!  Very Sad!  But a very interesting uncommom thought !

Safwan
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 01-31-2000 04:26 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I wonder what angel tears are made of?
I don't think anyone's ever been able to sample one.
This is adorable
Liz
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8 posted 01-31-2000 04:51 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This one actually came to me at the old wondering of where rain comes from...it's an obsession of mine, and maybe raindrops are just sad tears of a lonely angel (with a little of my feelings at the moment added in)
Thanks for all your replies..and James-knowing my present mood...I'm glad you sensed a bit of my own despair in this, much love ~D


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


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9 posted 02-01-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Me2   Email Me2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Me2

Someday she'll spread her wings again; she'll reveal her ever-glowing warmth. Her shadows of sadness will become shadows of flight. She'll feel NEW happiness never felt before. Because the people that love her and the angels beside her will mend her broken heart.

Paul
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so you too, know the sadness of the seraphim...I thought I was alone on that one.
I now feel a little less lonely tonight.  Thank you.
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My first thought is "Are you this sad angel?"  You have done wonders with the concept and truly hope if this is you that you soon smile again  

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL


JamesMichael
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12 posted 02-02-2000 07:06 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Beautiful Devina.  I think there are lots more angels out there if this one continues to disappoint you he will be a fallen angel.  James
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Sad to picture an angel crying..   But u painted the picture so well and it was a good short poem.  

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."
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So sad  
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15 posted 02-03-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so sad yet beautiful! Well done!

Denise
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16 posted 02-03-2000 01:37 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Paul- from the bottom of my heart...thank you!!!

Serenity- glad I could help...wish we never felt alone!!

Fist Knight- your comment alone has made me smile!!! Thank you for that!!!

James- you are too sweet dear...  

Rosalind- I wonder if angels really do cry...thank you for the comments!!

Ruth and Denise- thank you sweethearts for the read!!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


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Gemini
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17 posted 02-03-2000 03:54 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

A very beautiful and sad poem.
 
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