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Love beyond Perception

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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


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Love beyond Perception
~~~~~~~~~

Two soul mates part
"nothing lasts forever"
I doubt we'll ever meet again
"I love you
there will be no other"
this parting fills my heart with pain

You heart is drifting
so I release you
a cheerful past can I forget
Though I may wander life in sorrow
my prayers are that your happy yet

Perhaps in time
on a lonely evening
your thoughts will reminisce of me
And wonder if I'm even living
that night I'll think the same of thee

Through this lonesome life I wander
alone with thoughts
of only you
Your memory blinds my sight forever
with love far greater than you knew


When slowly all your friends depart you
those friends you thought
you needed so
Bare in mind the friend you departed
still loves you greater than you know

~~~~~~~~~~~~~
© Copyright 2000 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind


1 posted 01-30-2000 11:58 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Rex~

I can very much relate to your poem~
Very nicely written~

Marie~

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with you


2 posted 01-31-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Rex, I too can relate, how beautifully stated. -SEA
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


3 posted 01-31-2000 02:45 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Thanks Marie and Sea

The reading of it now sure beats the writing
of it then.

Rex
dovesongs
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4 posted 01-31-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for dovesongs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dovesongs

Parting can be such a painful experience.  You captured it beautifully.  Thank God those feelings don't last forever.  Very nice.
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5 posted 01-31-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Parting is never easy. Welcome to Passions, Rex! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


6 posted 01-31-2000 11:37 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

You are all very kind thankyou
and that card you sent me, Denise,
you are very thoughtful.

Rex
fc
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7 posted 01-31-2000 12:38 PM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fc

very sad, it does the pain good to write it out....
Gene
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8 posted 01-31-2000 12:46 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Welcome, Rex.

I just wrote a poem on almost exactly the same thing, only it's not nearly as good as this.

~Gene
Danny Holloway
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9 posted 01-31-2000 12:57 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Was there once as well, and it's reading nice work as yours that brings back the best memories.
DH
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 01-31-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

If only love would say goodbye at the same time to each concerned..

HUGS

 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...
Marilyn
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11 posted 01-31-2000 03:30 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Ah the pain is so fresh in this. I remember it well, although my memory does not creep back anymore. There is more unhappy memories then happy ones for me, my happiness lays forward. I hope that yours will as well.

Welcome to Passions!
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


12 posted 02-01-2000 12:53 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Thanks everyone ... this event took place
about 23 years ago and I'm now on my
second and very happy marriage of hmmm
19 I think years ... wife better not read this or I'm cooked !  
 
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