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In Trouble, Plenty

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deleeme
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0 posted 01-30-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

I know that I'm in trouble, plenty
And the Thunderstorm's ready to blow,
I don't need no TV Weatherman man
To tell me what he thinks might show!
For he might say it's sunny and pleasent
And his words may be true as God's Book,
But I know I'm in trouble, plenty
When She turns and she gives me "that Look"!

I know that I'm in trouble, plenty
And no "sorry's" will e'er do the trick,
When I've messed up and she gives those Glances
Which cut me right down to the quick!
Yes, no words then need ever be spoken
For her Look tells me all that there is,
She's had quite enough of my laziness--
And right now, she is plenty Pissed!

I know that I'm in trouble, plenty
E'ven when the Bank teller says I'm fine,
Not overdrawn in all my accounts--
But overdrawn in my face and my mind!
For to me, the worse thing that could happen
Is for me to be proved a true Snook
When the "Judge Judy" of my Life sets in Judgment
And casts forth her Judgmentally bad Look!

SO I know that I must do much better
For her wrath, I Deserve, I suppose,
But oh, what a strained relationship
When at me,stern, she looks down her nose!
I hope this time, won't be a life sentence--
But good behavior will get me paroled,
And she loves me again, with her love all aflame
And her Look says, "Come and let Love unfold!"



 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-

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1 posted 01-30-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

deleeme, what did you do?! Never mind I probably don't want to know! LOL   I hope she forgives you soon! Great writting. -SEA
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2 posted 01-30-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great, David! Now see what you get for gettin' on her nerves...hehehe

ROFL@Judge Judy look!!! I can picture it now!

Denise
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3 posted 01-30-2000 11:30 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

LOL!!  David are you being bad? haha...it reminds me of the one show on Home Improvements.....when they were in the shop talking about those "looks." haha...they could kill couldn't they?  so stay in good graces! hehe the end sounds good, nothing like making up!  
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4 posted 01-31-2000 02:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so cute I had to bring it up again!
I also wanted to make a guess as to what you did that caused that look....spending too much time on your computer, maybe? LOL

Denise
deleeme
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5 posted 01-31-2000 04:55 PM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

Thank you all for your sympathy and consoling!  Denise you hit it right on the head--Since she can't compete with the computer/internet & ICQ, like se could another woman--She uses her LASER LOOK to put me in place & cut me down to size--OUCH! And no kidding--She has one Fiercely Mean look when lets her negative feelings show!!
  Thanks to everyone--If I suddenly dissappear without a trace--please forward this message to the FBI. (Thanks)
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 01-31-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Bank accounts are important, but so are Love accounts.  Make lots of deposits and trouble a plenty will come around less often. (don't forget the roses!).
DH
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7 posted 01-31-2000 07:15 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

FBI ! LOL Will it help if I give Linda a big hug from here ? BIG HUG Linda !  
Great poem David.  
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8 posted 02-01-2000 04:36 AM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

Thanks Danny, for the sound advice,I might try making a NIGHT DEPOSIT and see if that works.
Thank you Munda, Some times I think thats the safest kind of Hug--but, from my stand point, not the most fun--
  I just wonder-about my predicament-- are there any out there thinking--BEEN THERE-DONE THAT---???
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