Yes, welcome! This is incredibly beautiful..you have a lot of talent!
~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha
One time before I was a member of this wonderful forum. I went under the name of 'Keeper of the Keys', if any of you remember. I have to admit that I never got as many replies to my writings then as I did on this very first one today. Thank you all so incredibly much. I love you all!
God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I can not change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.
This is beautifully romantic...welcome to passions once more. I'd only make to very small changes in the first and third stanza to just perfect the rhyme...I was going to e-mail them to you, but since you've no e-mail listed...Just a suggestion here:
A love kept within (With nowhere to roam) Has discovered a place And declared it its home
Nobody compares (Such a beauty to hold) Your eyes like diamonds Your heart like gold