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0 posted 01-30-2000 08:29 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


What you said was forever
but now we are apart
you lied to me
and broke my trusting heart

Maybe you forgot
or just didn't remember
allow me to remind you
what you said was forever

You knew I'd never leave
you said you'd always stay
so why is it
that you've walked away?

Maybe you forgot
or just didn't remember
allow me to remind you
what you said was forever

Those painfull words
hurt for so long
but now I'm happy
and my heart is strong.......

     -Because-

Maybe you forgot
or just didn't remember
allow me to remind you
what you said was Forever.
-SEA-
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1 posted 01-30-2000 08:36 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Nice poem. Sounds all too familiar.  Yeah, keep repeating "forever" maybe my X will here it.

~Gene

Oh, SEA, I just want you to know that you have the distinctive honor of being my 100th post.  

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Sad that forever doesn't mean the same thing to everybody!! Great poem, SEA!!

Congratulations on '100' Gene! Boy you did that fast!!

Denise
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Gene, why thank you! I am honored that I am your 100th post.

Denise, glad you liked it!  
-SEA
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4 posted 01-30-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SEA-
Did I write this?
Nah ...

You have a way of getting
right to the heart of things.
I like it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge, thank you. I am flattered!  -SEA
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You've expressed yourself so well.  And me too while you were at it...I feel I know exactly what you were getting at with this.  But too bad, as was pointed out, "forever" isn't the same for everyone...  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

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7 posted 01-30-2000 10:22 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Not even "forever and a day" carries much weight any more. If people were forced to honor "forever", there wouldn't be any divorce lawyers! What a concept!!  
Nice writing.
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8 posted 01-31-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for Alina Le Ann   Email Alina Le Ann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alina Le Ann's Home Page   View IP for Alina Le Ann

WOW!!

I love the way you put this together...
I don't know what else to say other than....WOW!

Alina
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Alina, Wow is good! Thank you. -SEA
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10 posted 01-31-2000 12:09 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I am at a loss for words here too! Struck the heart and some good writing!
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SEA~

Well... talk about cutting to the heart of things~

That was beautiful~

Marie~
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That was simply wonderful SEA
You are so good at making the point stand out
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One, Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!   -SEA
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Hi-C   )

We must have fallen from the same hay
wagon ... you, me, and countless others.
Your poem really hit home.
Does climbing back on the next wagon make
sense.It worked for me ... I got lucky,
I guess.

Rex
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Very Nice ...It makes me wonder "Why" do we promise forever ? "Why" do we need to hear it ?

Safwan
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VERY nice, Sea. And how ironic; I just said the same thing (in different words) to someone of 14 years just this week!  Kinda neat to know I'm not the only one that 'believes'in forever.  I personally thank you.

Paul
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Rex..... glad you liked.....

Safwan..... darn good questions..... I'm thinking insecurity.......

Me2.....I thank you!...... glad you liked.....
-SEA-
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18 posted 01-31-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I have written a new poem that has a similar theme.  Will be posted shortly.
Enjoyed reading yours, as always!
Danny
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SEA,
Beautiful, just beautiful! Gulp!
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Danny, looking forward to reading yours!

Dovesongs, wow. thank you!  
-SEA-
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Sea,
Forever, what a word.  I hope we both find it one day!!!
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Why is it that we all at some time are hurt by someone we love and trust..I feel for you sea and have been down that road myself. Hugs to you and yes I bet your heart is sronger I know mine is...Tracie  
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Absolutely wonderful!!! Your final stanza says it all, well done  
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Hoot, your praise, just set the tone for my day!   thank you, so glad you liked it!- SEA
 
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