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Weeping Willow (update for you) |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Weeping Willow Part # 2 The line was drawn today in stone He is the one who soon be gone Tears were descending her face She fought for her rights with grace She has not lost her dignity She faced the hard reality You my friends unbeknown to you You have helped her too The “Weeping Willow” as device I gave to her with all of your replies She read and understood each line She cried but we know she will be fine Forgive my move that I did do Forgive me that I haven’t told you Still remains to see the end But with hope we all depend The power of our words in love May have saved today the fragile dove A miracle perhaps you say I hope that our words will show her the final way The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, that's great Helmut! I'm glad she made a decision to change things. It worries me though when you say he soon will be gone. I guess perhaps it may have just been my experience but I was the one who had to leave. Not fair of course, but at least he didn't know where to find me as easily (he always found out where I had been, it seems, a day or two after I was gone from there and had found a new hiding place ...this went on for a year or more) Well, tell her to be safe, okay? Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-30-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helmut- If anything any of us said would help that girl remove herself from an abusive relationship ... then we'd say it all over again. The only thing is ... 'SOON' ... he'll SOON be gone ... yesterday isn't soon enough. Stay in touch with her ... she may need you now more than ever. What a kind and caring person you are. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This doesn't surprise me that you'd be there for her, with a heart as caring as yours!!! True friends come once in a lifetime and I'm glad she has been blessed with you...as have we all!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Actually she is leaving him And soon...we are working on it She has two little once that need to have a home We have offered her to help whenever, whatever and however Thank you all for carring and hoping with me that this will all come to an end soon. Denise that is horrible to hide for a year, he will not hunt her down. We'll make sure of that. I know Marge soon should have been yesterday I wish it was. I do care and I do my best with your help. Devina, as Balladeer said you are outstanding Thank you dear Hugs and Love to all The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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